September 18, 2011 12:30pm I see the fangs but agree they are maybe too subtle. Like the disturbing feeling here. There is a sense of danger, of course, but I feel angst as well. they're both very palpable. Great job.
September 17, 2011 11:10pm I like this a lot. But sadly, I think the "fangs" are so subtle, that I am the only person to realize that she does in fact have fangs. Like I said, I do like it, just think the fangs / vampire aspect could have been pushed a little more, because I think most people here have missed the boat. Of course I saw it, I pay attention to the little details. Hehe ;)
