Yahya wrote:
me please, bored waiting to leave!

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...17% - Show more skin and dare to expand.
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...20% - Great smile suited to lifestyle stock photo or commercial catalogue work.
(3)Posing and agility factor...17%
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...15%-Show more versatility through some daring out of the box concepts your port is limited and is too conservative.


Total Score:69%

TILL H  wrote:


this is my fav, for sure

there is a lot of attention to detail, which is great...and i can tell that you direct well...
most of your models also look very comfortable, which i like a lot

it's very upbeat, which is refreshing

i wish you were brave enough to shoot guys more often

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape factor...17% - Try shooting from the ground up more to amplify the height issue and to bring out the boldness in capture.
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...16%
(3)Posing and agility factor...18% - Based on your height you work with what you have well.
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...22%
- Good diversity shows you are not limited to a particular genre or style.

Total Score:73%

Laura A Shodire wrote:
moi?

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...18%
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...16%
(3)Posing and agility factor...20%
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...22%


Total Score:76%

Jonexpo wrote:

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape factor...17% - Try shooting from the ground up more to amplify the height issue and to bring out the boldness in capture.
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...16%
(3)Posing and agility factor...18% - Based on your height you work with what you have well.
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...22%
- Good diversity shows you are not limited to a particular genre or style.

Total Score:73%

in school, that would be a low "C"... ugh....interesting, though.......thanx for the input ! 

Dekilah wrote:
Me please

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...17%
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...17%-Too many repetitive lack lustre expressions would love to see a smile here or there to invite the viewer in more and to entice an emotion. 
(3)Posing and agility factor...17% - Once again too repetitive although your overall material is nice.
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...19%-Although well suited to artistic nudity dont limit yourself to that style,you would also suit a no of themes eg pin-up or studio portraiture.


Total Score:70%

Jonexpo wrote:

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...17%
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...17%-Too many repetitive lack lustre expressions would love to see a smile here or there to invite the viewer in more and to entice an emotion. 
(3)Posing and agility factor...17% - Once again too repetitive although your overall material is nice.
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...19%-Although well suited to artistic nudity dont limit yourself to that style,you would also suit a no of themes eg pin-up or studio portraiture.


Total Score:70%

Thank you for your opinion. I work with what I have. Art nudes is what is available to me right now. I've done other work, but it's never as good as the art nudes. I'd love to try pin-up, but I don't have the resources right now. If I could find a good MUA and hair stylist, plus somewhere to get wardrobe, I'd be set. Knoxville just really isn't that great for any of that stuff. I do have a clothed port but since this is my nude port, you're naturally going to see, well, art nudes.

Zandrea wrote:
Im in

I love your portfolio. the images are so soft and delicate. It is exactly what any bride wants from a photographer.
You have a few photos, that if you pulled from your portfolio it would make you look like a professional.
No offense but I think think this one is quite tacky compared to the rest of your work.

http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … aeebfd.jpg

Also the one with the red dress is very pretty, but its completely different from what you have.

This is gorgeous! I want this for my book! Great work!

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...20% - Nice fluidity and presentation you are aware of what physically translates well onto a captured image
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...16%-Why so serious always nice to show the lighter side with a smile here or there to balance out your port...
(3)Posing and agility factor...19%
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...20%-Nice and diverse however would throw in a few thought provoking implied's to spice things up.


Total Score:75%

LeAnnaMarie wrote:
I wanna play

Syla Simone wrote:
ME PLEASE

Jessica Lynn87 wrote:
do me please! i enjoyed everything in your port, but this is my favorite:

i love the models you choose and how you capture their natural beauty. You are clearly a master of lighting, which though i'm not a photographer, I'd say is probably somewhere around 60% of a good shot. You have a beautiful collection of work!

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...17% - Cute
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...20% - Nice smile great energy would be accentuated by good lighting & photography.
(3)Posing and agility factor...18%
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...17% - Is somewhat limited atm but will surely develop with time.


Total Score:72%

Jennifer Barker wrote:
okay .. raises hand 

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...21%
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...20% - Love the brooding eyes and encapsulating depth but would love to see a giggle here or there to show the human lighthearted element.
(3)Posing and agility factor...20%
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...19%


Total Score:80%

littledubs wrote:
I'm not your traditional model, but what do you think?  Should I keep at it or hang it up and get a real job??

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape factor...20%
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...20%
(3)Posing and agility factor...17% - Too repetitive try mixing it up a bit.
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...15% - Once again too much of the same conservative style more diversity will come with time and experience.


Total Score:72%

Jonexpo wrote:

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...21%
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...20% - Love the brooding eyes and encapsulating depth but would love to see a giggle here or there to show the human lighthearted element.
(3)Posing and agility factor...20%
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...19%


Total Score:80%

Thank You 

Syla Simone wrote:

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...20%
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...18%
(3)Posing and agility factor...17%
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...15% - Not too much material to critique i would seek out strong photographers to bring out your potential the pics in your port are poorly lit and dont do your look justice.


Total Score:70%

Dana LL wrote:
Me please

Sure...:-)

MsDarlyn wrote:
Me?

Cant do a detailed critique with only 2 images...Nice smile though.

Jonexpo wrote:
Simply critique my port honestly and i'll rate you based on the following criteria:

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...25%
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...25%
(3)Posing and agility factor...25%
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...25%


Total Score:

still up for some welcomed judging?

TILL H  wrote:


this is my fav, for sure

This is also my favorite. I really love your portfolio. It's beautiful. I would like to see more color, though. Don't get me wrong, your b&w images are gorgeous.. but so are are your colorful ones, and there seem to be quite a bit less of the latter.

Would love to hear what you think.

Zhi Feng wrote:
me pls (:

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...15% - I feel you are holding back in your shoots. the ability to come out of your shell and scream sass and confidence will come with time and experience.
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...16%
(3)Posing and agility factor...16% - Too much repetition atm.
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...15% - Your material is limited atm and could do with some more outdoor shots with varying locations.


Total Score:62%

Amanda Lentini wrote:
Your port is amazing.  I love the models and your pictures.

This is my favorite picture because there is such care and emotion emanating from it.

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...17% - Strong nice and confident.
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...17% - More personality needs to be conveyed to draw in the viewer.
(3)Posing and agility factor...18% - Nice nudity element but try some alternate angles which will need to be discussed with your photographers prior.
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...20% - Daring and bold,would show more diversity with natural outdoor full length clothed themes and a few headshots to appreciate the facial element.


Total Score:72%