Forums > Critique > I will list your best and will tell you why.

Photographer

MorittuPhotoGraphy

Posts: 376

Florence, Toscana, Italy

...oh well let's play! ;-)

Apr 25 11 01:40 pm Link

Model

Tamara Z

Posts: 43

Houston, Texas, US

varton wrote:

I found there one I like.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110314/17/4d7eb661e034d_m.jpg
good job
but you need more boudoir and traditional headshots and fashion shots in your port.

Thank you!!! smile

Apr 25 11 01:42 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Kendra from Canada wrote:

you have a gorgeous port,
love below look and style
very beautiful
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110114/12/4d30ad6707d2c_m.jpg

Apr 25 11 01:57 pm Link

Model

Kendra from Canada

Posts: 447

Tofino, British Columbia, Canada

varton wrote:

you have a gorgeous port,
love below look and style
very beautiful
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110114/12/4d30ad6707d2c_m.jpg

thank you
smile

Apr 25 11 01:58 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

MorittuPhotoGraphy wrote:
...oh well let's play! ;-)

you have proven skills, obvious talent and outstanding port.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100623/02/4c21d96025699_m.jpghttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101119/13/4ce6e9357fa41_m.jpg
both listed
gorgeous job all over the port.

Apr 25 11 02:02 pm Link

Photographer

MorittuPhotoGraphy

Posts: 376

Florence, Toscana, Italy

varton wrote:

you have proven skills, obvious talent and outstanding port.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100623/02/4c21d96025699_m.jpghttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101119/13/4ce6e9357fa41_m.jpg
both listed
gorgeous job all over the port.

THX a lot for taking the time to have a look and write such a kind comment.

I really appreciate your feedback.

Wish you all the best

Marco

Apr 25 11 02:05 pm Link

Photographer

Paul Tirado Photography

Posts: 4363

New York, New York, US

Take a look and let me know. Thanks.

Apr 25 11 05:09 pm Link

Model

B-Chiseled

Posts: 697

Savannah, Georgia, US

I'm in!
Thanks in advance

Apr 25 11 05:56 pm Link

Photographer

PTDMedia

Posts: 39

Lebanon, Pennsylvania, US

Do me please! lol

Im new be gentle but honest I can take it

Apr 25 11 06:15 pm Link

Model

Marie Ivanova

Posts: 178

Boston, Massachusetts, US

I have only 6 - which one is your favorite

Apr 25 11 06:18 pm Link

Photographer

TDSImages

Posts: 1017

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

Which is my best??

Apr 25 11 06:20 pm Link

Model

Randi Bennett

Posts: 1078

Modesto, California, US

........smile

Apr 25 11 06:23 pm Link

Model

x Ali

Posts: 2543

West Hollywood, California, US

Please share smile

Apr 25 11 06:29 pm Link

Model

Andreas Bacchus

Posts: 173

Alpharetta, Georgia, US

I would love to see your opinions when you have an opportunity smile

Apr 25 11 06:32 pm Link

Photographer

NLe Photography

Posts: 109

Orange, California, US

I would like to know, please smile

Apr 25 11 06:36 pm Link

Photographer

Better Souls

Posts: 128

Cleveland Heights, Ohio, US

Man, 10 pages? OP delivers.

Apr 25 11 06:40 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Paul Tirado Photography wrote:
Take a look and let me know. Thanks.

smile hello Paul, don't think I am extra nice to you because you are from NY LOL
wink gorgeous port with excellent fashion shots
too hard to choose as your work is not the run of the mill
so love this one the most
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101027/20/4cc8f00db9f38_m.jpg
excellent look and style
love the perspective as well
stellar port keep clicking
listed

Apr 25 11 08:20 pm Link

Model

Rachel Maren

Posts: 1029

Durham, North Carolina, US

I would love to hear what you think about mine smile

Apr 25 11 08:23 pm Link

Model

Elaine 45

Posts: 50

Fort Worth, Texas, US

I want to know....

Apr 25 11 08:28 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Bobby Chisholm wrote:
I'm in!
Thanks in advance

Bob this road may be closed but not yours.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100415/07/4bc7273c17663_m.jpg
You have potential, fix up the port a bit and you are good
I did not like much your tie and suit photo
your head was pointing at the wrong direction.
Also add some business executive, workout pics, sports or man at work.
show you are flexible.

listed

Apr 25 11 08:28 pm Link

Model

Jermaine Tubbs

Posts: 6

New Orleans, Louisiana, US

Do me next!!!

Apr 25 11 08:30 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

ThomasPD Media wrote:
Do me please! lol

Im new be gentle but honest I can take it

Hello
I checked your port and could not find any picture I could list at this time.
Your best appear to be this one below
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110207/11/4d504568ba447_m.jpg
I would suggest that you remove the tire wheel and red car picture smile from your port because it does not add any value at all.
Your pinup shoot is done in front of a background that takes the focus away from the model. That plane's wheels are huge and ugly.
Costume/wardrobe is not enough to create a pinup.
Try to be more careful how you frame models, shoot with a goal and not for the sake of shooting. Analyze other photographers work and learn from them.
Good luck to you and be patient.

Apr 25 11 09:13 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Marie Ivanova wrote:
I have only 6 - which one is your favorite

Hello Marie
I like some of pics in your port and I think this one below is the best in quality of pic and look
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110408/13/4d9f73721dd82_m.jpg
I am unable to list any pics at this time
good luck and keep it up.

Apr 25 11 09:16 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

TDSImages wrote:
Which is my best??

already listed this one once before as I like the best
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090423/22/49f15162379e1_m.jpg

Apr 25 11 09:19 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Randi Bennett  wrote:
........smile

I think this one is the best and cutest look
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101121/19/4ce9e90d9d75a_m.jpg
listed

Apr 25 11 09:21 pm Link

Model

Sonja Melissa

Posts: 55

Sarnia, Ontario, Canada

I'd like to hear smile

Apr 25 11 09:22 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

x Ali wrote:
Please share smile

You have very nice work. You have worked with many alternative models and I find that very cool
the best in your port is the one below
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100913/23/4c8f19395780f_m.jpg
listed.
Great job

Apr 25 11 09:24 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Andreas Bacchus wrote:
I would love to see your opinions when you have an opportunity smile

This is I think the best in your port
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110425/17/4db6152962402_m.jpg
but none of your pics excite me enought to list at this time.

Apr 25 11 09:30 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

NLe Photography wrote:
I would like to know, please smile

Your work is awesome and I like this one below the most
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/081110/21/4918ec72510b1_m.jpg
listed

Apr 25 11 09:32 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Better Souls wrote:
Man, 10 pages? OP delivers.

Not too many photos in your port but this one stands out
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110206/20/4d4f7802e9ba7_m.jpg
listed
nice job

Apr 25 11 09:35 pm Link

Model

Elysia Winter

Posts: 328

New York, New York, US

Me, me, meeee! big_smile

Apr 25 11 09:37 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

RachelKahn wrote:
I would love to hear what you think about mine smile

Rachel,
try to work on your poses, you do not smile very often.
I found few nice looking pictures but most are shot at amateur level.
Try to get an experience photographer so you can be coached in your poses.
Good Luck
I love this pose a lot.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110424/18/4db4d19192f36_m.jpg

Apr 25 11 09:40 pm Link

Model

Suzie Rebecca nix

Posts: 6

Riverside, California, US

Just wanna learn what I need to do to poses more powerful shots.

Apr 25 11 09:44 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Elaine 45 wrote:
I want to know....

You are a gorgeous model
This pose is fabulous

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19905709
listed

Apr 25 11 09:44 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Jermaine Tubbs wrote:
Do me next!!!

your best is probably this one
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110410/16/4da241b22084e_m.jpg
I did not have much choice to list any.

Apr 25 11 09:47 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Sonja Melissa wrote:
I'd like to hear smile

You need better quality photos in your port
your poses are not bad but they need to be refined.
Your best look is probably this one but the picture is too pink and low contrast.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091201/23/4b1611546bc10_m.jpg

Apr 25 11 09:51 pm Link

Photographer

HtownGlam photography

Posts: 1215

Houston, Texas, US

lets do it ... i am ready!

Apr 25 11 09:51 pm Link

Photographer

James Reed Photography

Posts: 196

Tulsa, Oklahoma, US

Wow...you've been going at this awhile. I'm in if you're still doing it. Thanks.

Apr 25 11 09:55 pm Link

Model

Marketa Fei

Posts: 401

Berkeley, California, US

Ooooh, me, please! Me, please!

Apr 25 11 09:55 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Kendra Richards wrote:
Me, me, meeee! big_smile

You are drop dead gorgeous
I like couple of pictures that do real justice to your beauty.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100415/12/4bc76f14912da_m.jpg
listed
great pose and style
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110302/09/4d6e7dc96861b_m.jpg
listed

Apr 25 11 09:56 pm Link