Sollie Studios wrote:
I would be interested in your opinion, please and thank you.

Briana, you don't have too many to pick from but, I like this one's unusual perspective colorful shot and first eye catcher.
Your best and my fav despite the tight cropping and flat light. Great expression and look. Listed as cute
Nothing else really strikes out.
you can delete those
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17977143
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22961336
as they do not add anything of value.

This is a good catch and great location work on your lighting and framing, do not crop too tight.
keep it up encouraging start.

Isserley wrote:
I would love to participate

Bonjour Valerie
you are taking me to a wonderland with this real eye catcher and one of your best, listed.
excellent work on this you are just amazing. That must have been a lot of fun to do I guess listed.
Very sensual and soft vibes on this the corset adds a lot to your mood. listed.
I would not make any changes in your port, love it. Excellent job

thefurman wrote:
please
i need all the feedback i can get.

Alex, I don't use the word creative much lightly but you are creative.
Your port is not run of the mill and I am impressed with your bw work where I see a balanced consistent highlights and shadows, beautiful figures and meaningful captures.
some of your work has vintage feel https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16245392 +18

some are avantgarde

some are simply the naked truth https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20210494 +18

This is one of your best listed.
this one  is my fav listed.
keep it up
your artistry is well recorded Good luck.

Rae Johnston wrote:
I would love to hear your thoughts and feedback

Hello Rae,
You have a pretty port showing a pretty woman
I love this sensual and wild. listed.
Your poses are gorgeous love your great camera presence and eye contact.
You may want to add some urban looks and beauty boudoirs.
Excellent look , keep it up.

The Falcons Nest wrote:
I'm always a gamer. Hit me up!

Per index on first page you have been served many moons ago on page 12
https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st15247025

since then I also discovered this very good one

beautiful style and gorgeous capture. Listed

varton wrote:
Alex, I don't use the word creative much lightly but you are creative.
Your port is not run of the mill and I am impressed with your bw work where I see a balanced consistent highlights and shadows, beautiful figures and meaningful captures.
some of your work has vintage feel https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16245392 +18

some are avantgarde

some are simply the naked truth https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20210494 +18

This is one of your best listed.
this one  is my fav listed.
keep it up
your artistry is well recorded Good luck.

Thank you!!!

Jeanne Luis wrote:
me

Hello Jeanne from Sunny Florida.
I kind of dream of palm trees and pinapple vodka cocktail on the beach

I know some photographers are crazy about yellow natural light hues in their photos. That may be the case for your last 5 photos in the bottom of the port which I am totally skipping because I don't like yellow sodium lights.
your beautiful figure shows well in this and probably the best framed, posed, and lighted one in the port.
Like the outfit and location in those series but your modeling is absent. You look tired or distracted, totally disconnected from camera.
Try to improve your poses and face expressions.
Beautiful figure is important but you have to put in your mind and your soul, and attitude into your work. No one want to work with someone who's just looking at the camera in a lifeless way.

Better Souls wrote:
Woo-hoo, dedicated critiquer sighted! Totally jumping in on this.

Hello Matt
You have an interesting vision and enjoyed looking at your photos.
Your best and my fav is this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22861196 +18
listed
this is another good one
like the spooky feel.
I was not connected to the others as much.
I would delete those
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21440895
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22455726
they do not add much to your port.
Keep up the good work,
I would be interested in seeing some more work in your port.

varton wrote:
Hello Matt
You have an interesting vision and enjoyed looking at your photos.
Your best and my fav is this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22861196 +18
listed
this is another good one
like the spooky feel.
I was not connected to the others as much.
I would delete those
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21440895
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22455726
they do not add much to your port.
Keep up the good work,
I would be interested in seeing some more work in your port.

thank you so much! Actually, my webpage that's linked from my MM profile has far, far more work in it. If it's not too much trouble (and it'd probably be best if you hit a few other requests here before you came back to me), perhaps you could suggest two photos off of it that could replace the ones on my MM port that you feel are weaker? I've been mulling it over quite a bit.

Also, I really like that you think my newest photo is actually my best. You may or may not realize how encouraging that is for me.

Mickey Maurer wrote:
When you get a chance, take a look at mine.

Cheers,

Mickey

Hello Mickey
I like your port, your classy and sassy expressions
captured mostly at amateur level stills.
I hate your hand bra pictures, seriously there are better ways to hide those assets. Besides some pictures don't let anything to imagination like this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22276790
drop dead gorgeous, your best . listed.
I love your wild look here
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22910293
you are such a gorgeous vixen.
I like your confidence in your poses and your body building is impressive.
You need a good pro photographer to harness all the passion and expression still locked up in you which is waiting to be unleashed.
added edit:
Jeff Fiore photos added a lot to your port.
Way to go.

varton wrote:

Bonjour Valerie
you are taking me to a wonderland with this real eye catcher and one of your best, listed.
excellent work on this you are just amazing. That must have been a lot of fun to do I guess listed.
Very sensual and soft vibes on this the corset adds a lot to your mood. listed.
I would not make any changes in your port, love it. Excellent job

Thank you so much!

The facepaint WAS a great deal of fun indeed I can hardly wait to see the rest of that set

Better Souls wrote:
Actually, my webpage that's linked from my MM profile has far, far more work in it. If it's not too much trouble (and it'd probably be best if you hit a few other requests here before you came back to me), perhaps you could suggest two photos off of it that could replace the ones on my MM port that you feel are weaker? I've been mulling it over quite a bit.

well I looked at your site but it is a pain to link images to the forum. The one with  lamp shade on model's head was remarquable but I saw similar ones before elsewhere the steamboat wanna be (gas mask girl)  is actually good other then the tight cropping I did not like much. The other black model nude in red kimono is excellent. The one with the girl sitting in the suitcase, her pose is boring although technically photo is well done.

Benny Beauvais wrote:
I'd love to play..

Hello Brooke
you have gorgeous figure and beautiful look
I love this
your best
in this I wanted to see your both eyes, thank you very much
excellent photo and profile listed
I love your everyday woman type look a lot
you are doing well, amazing beauty. stunning figure.

2days Photos wrote:
It is very kind of you to keep on going and going and going.  Hm.... I am thinking pink bunny now, lol If you would consider taking a look I like to know your thoughts   Thanks

I commented on your work few days ago
https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st15284224
page 19
front page index would be useful to look at because I do not skip anyone

stevie oetjengerdes wrote:
interested to know what you think!

stevie, you are a top notch photographer with a personal vision and an eye for beauty.
You are a story teller in a single frame frozen  in time.
Your work is contrasted and rich in props use of interesting location and you coach your models well.
A+ port, talent with proven skills.
this is my fav and an eye catcher
another exceptional pose and colorful style listed.
my personal favorite listed

Moodscapes wrote:
Interested if you're still doing this. Thanks

pls check the first page index
already done at page 16
https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st15259707

jahnhall wrote:
i'd appreciate your time.

thanks in advance!

Hello
thanks for being patient.
I love your port, mostly male subjects and excellent portraiture.
Great mastery of light and eye for details.
I love this a lot my fav, listed.
this is your best listed.
Great job keep clicking

bazzar wrote:
thanks for some feed-back

Salut
OK we have here a cool dude with a 6 pack,
great look. This is your best look
listed.
Great classic look
keep it up, you have a great port. Bonne Chance!

varton wrote:

I commented on your work few days ago
https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st15284224
page 19
front page index would be useful to look at because I do not skip anyone

Oh, yikes!  Sorry about that.  Thank you again for your kind words

Andy Rodriguez Photo wrote:
sure, why not.  Have at it.

"I setup lights, make some jokes, and take some pictures. "
a good summary on your work and perhaps you do some more...
great outdoor shoot here https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22918554 you know your "sexy"
one of your best I am not sure how much post processing helped but it is a great shot.
another good one excellent exposure and lighting
your best and my fav, excellent light even if the horizon is not leveled , listed

Garden of Heather wrote:
Holy shiz, are you still doing this?  If so, then yes please. 

Heather, you are absolutely gorgeous and your nudes are beautifully done.
I find this  very erotic story teller. your best and listed, I see there, grace and sensuality, your poses do not have static feel. Your fingers and other extremities are very well exposed and well posed in your pictures and I doubt it is just the photographer's skill to make you look good.
here is another outstanding nude boudoir https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22546516 +18 it would have been better to look down a bit.
I love your venus like look here https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21749825 +18 such beautiy with  voluptuous proportions is often painted on Italian and French murals in palaces and castles.
I would delete this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22125333 your hair look bad, and do not add much to your port.
this is my fav https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22546372 +18 listed

You can probably shoot all genres with a lot of ease. Your eyes are captivating and you have a beautiful port. Compliments and good luck

deniees wrote:
i'd love to hear your thougts

Hello Denise,
amazing beautiful young lady at 16
I love your freckles and this natural smile in this but the chroma towards yellow shift makes your teeth appear cigarette stained. Suggest to be retouched by a pro.
This one is your best and my fav love the eyes and drama, perfect crop. listed.
You are in my list of rare beauties that can be a major turn one even clothed
especially love this pose super girly and sassy.
Watch the slightly puffy eyes in some pics like this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22107615 freckles will accentuate and make them a lot worst then they are

You have a long career in front of you
keep it up, you are gorgeous from any angle.

varton wrote:

Hello Denise,
amazing beautiful young lady at 16
I love your freckles and this natural smile in this but the chroma towards yellow shift makes your teeth appear cigarette stained. Suggest to be retouched by a pro.
This one is your best and my fav love the eyes and drama, perfect crop. listed.
You are in my list of rare beauties that can be a major turn one even clothed
especially love this pose super girly and sassy.
Watch the slightly puffy eyes in some pics like this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22107615 freckles will accentuate and make them a lot worst then they are

You have a long career in front of you
keep it up, you are gorgeous from any angle.

wow thanks for all the compliments!

chixpix wrote:
Me please , and thank you in advance.

I am so sorry you lost your wife over cancer.
She was a true beauty and probably still a great deal of inspiration to you.
As I navigated your port, rich in content, demonstrating obvious talent and know how including interesting concepts like this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22743550 +18 which I love..
and love the fetish vibes in those https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22986839 +18
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22986846 +18

Your best is this  excellent styling, gorgeous in focus blue eyes, my fav and listed.
and overall you do an outstanding and commendable work.