Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
Celine Sophia wrote: When you get a chance I am not sure what to say other then you are still 17 and have a bright future. The avatar is great some of pictures have fashion and commercial feel. I am sure you will find more photographers to work with. nice starter port , good luck to you
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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
Nathan Horswill wrote: Me? a real head turner I found few pinup work in your port but their tattoos just are too much and stealing the focus. I saw some excessive sharpening and saturation applied on some of your photos which I don't think was needed. nothing to list at this time.
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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
Alexander Long wrote: Would love to know your opinion  cool port and handsome look I can picture you well in early seventies you playing Rémi Laurent in à nous les petites anglaises who probably is now much older then you.
keep it up keep shooting
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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
BKT Photo wrote: Certainly! I'd appreciate it! Mostly pretty girls in sexy outfits, and in maxim well done! My fav in the bunch but nothing earth shatteringly memorable to list.
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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
Ksun Derulo wrote: Rather ambitious of you... I'm game. Your best listed ![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110726/10/4e2ef85d7fe8a_m.jpg]()
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What Fun Productions
Posts: 20868
Phoenix, Arizona, US
If you have the time, I would appreciate your opinion.
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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
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Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 3715
Los Angeles, California, US

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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
Adorkable Photography wrote: Me please? your work doesn't motivate me to click on thumbs Sorry nothing to list
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
AnonymousPhotography wrote: I'd love to find out! well some very good work here and some not so good I like this one as the best keep clicking you can do much better
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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
Alexandra Van Zeelandt wrote: This is kinda something I'm interested in knowing. I'm running for playboys July Coed of the month. I have posted 5 out of the 20 pictures on my mm port. 2 questions..do you think I stand a good chance and should I post a picture of my breasts? You are a pro and there is not much to say other then you would make any photographer shine. this one give me goosebumps but I like to see you like this Other then your playboy work and very few black and whites I wasn't much incited to click on thumbs. You worked with some real good people. You are doing excellent! keep it up. We need more models like you.
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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
grateful photography wrote: hit me up:) all links +18 Ok I read your bio " With a passion of bringing dark as well as light pictures into the world. " and you and I we are in full agreement there looking at your port Nothing really excites me in there but this is not to say your work is bad. It is just me, I prefer light then dark. I see some good techniques in your photography https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/14543848 +18 but your concepts give me shivers. I see everyday life, torment and torture, frustrations and mourning is illustrated as close to reality as possible. The rail road and dog walker themes are a miss both in demure and clothing style. You do much better in Torture, disaster and spooky horror genre. To summarize the whole port I would say fruits of above average craftsmanship with a fully twisted mind. Which is becoming the new normal these days. My favorite https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/14480719 I wish you the best.
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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
katie kelly wrote: me?  Not much in your port Katie, You do a gread job in shooting dudes avoid the facebook style snapshots you should add more pics to your port.
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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
SUPhotography wrote: Me  Very nice portraiture work good light but nothing to list at this time a sure favorite is this ![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120202/01/4f2a526564dcd_m.jpg]()
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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
Photos 4 The Memories wrote: Me please. below average work with some good ideas like this and a lot of humor. Keep shooting, you can do a lot better
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isfotografia
Posts: 59
Mexico City, Distrito Federal, Mexico
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
Amber the Eyes wrote: Get in line while I build my portfolio Thanks! you need to improve your posing. I like this concept but too tightly cropped the mark on your right arm might be a challenge to some photographers and retouchers.
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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
isfotografia wrote: Please At first nothing grabs my attention other then this, so I click on as the best in the bunch but realized it has some flaws like the awkward dark cast on the right arm. (due to hair light position on top and burned the shoulder because it is closer proximity, there is a 45 degree shadow on the floor but I can't tell accurately if it is the hair light or there is another strobe on right but a strobe on left would help to cancel out the unwanted shadow) when you post a collage like this on mayhem the flaws invisible on hi rez photos will be accentuated as you re-size them down to fit on page (or if you let MM to do auto resizing for you during upload). Better use weighted average re-sampling or experiment other settings on your program. Better not doing a collage at all or no more then 4 at a time. Note how the model's chest is burned. in fact you are getting back the reflection of your strobe from the white shirt. Not so crazy about your retouching work either. Color saturation is also a bit high on certain photos. Dark clothing on black background will fail you if you don't set up your lighting properly. delete these below because don't add anything and diminish your port https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8190642 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/13471960 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/14200374 might consider working on managing subject posing adding expression and projection steering towards a pet genre all my best and good luck to you.
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Acanthus Tattoos
Posts: 435
Union, New Jersey, US
I'd like to hear it, thanks
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
Acanthus Tattoos wrote: I'd like to hear it, thanks you will do fine in alternative genre my favorite look is this but what a clumsy way of photoshopping your nipple out. It diminishes the photo. So anyway, I am sure you will do fine in goth, and alternative fetish work. Improve your posing and expressions demure and soul missing. If serious in modeling and build your port set goals and focus on your genre, find a very good photographer and if you can afford to pay someone do it. Nice ink 
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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
Model
Acanthus Tattoos
Posts: 435
Union, New Jersey, US
varton wrote: you will do fine in alternative genre my favorite look is this but what a clumsy way of photoshopping your nipple out. It diminishes the photo. So anyway, I am sure you will do fine in goth, and alternative fetish work. Improve your posing and expressions demure and soul missing. If serious in modeling and build your port set goals and focus on your genre, find a very good photographer and if you can afford to pay someone do it. Nice ink  Thanks! (btw, photographer used a finishing effect on the photo, one of the areas happened to be the nipple but it was actually covered, I just wore a really low-cut top)
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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
Gentlemarine wrote: Go for it Just added new shots. Your best and my fav I didn't care much about anything else on your port. You need to improve your artificial lighting A LOT and try not to boost hue saturation and contrast as you do on some pics in your port, no it doesn't create art at all. Your daylight pics are fine but have no story or perceivable artistic ability or any well thought expression. anyone could shoot your port pictures and do probably a better job on some. Sorry but you can do much better.
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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
Acanthus Tattoos wrote: Thanks! (btw, photographer used a finishing effect on the photo, one of the areas happened to be the nipple but it was actually covered, I just wore a really low-cut top) I understand this picture can be your treasure if it is properly retouched and enhanced by a pro retoucher/digital artist. Us, as photographers, our job is really to provide a good well exposed and composed work regardless of concept but any work even perfect can use additional talent to augment the value of the final product. Anyway, I wish to see you to perform your modeling all in confidence and become the subject not the object. Good luck.
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Hi_Spade Photography
Posts: 927
Florence, South Carolina, US
Am I too late for the party  .
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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
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Ella Wilkes Photography
Posts: 414
Canberra, Australian Capital Territory, Australia
I couldn't see my name on your index so if you have time would like your thoughts
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Sven Lori
Posts: 278
Brussels, Brussels, Belgium

I like your port! Do u still have stamina for me :-)
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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
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Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
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Sven Lori
Posts: 278
Brussels, Brussels, Belgium

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Eddy Lix
Posts: 2
College Park, Maryland, US
I'm interested 
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2753
New York, New York, US
Eddy Lix wrote: I'm interested  You need to work on your expressions and posing. You look the same in most pictures, meaning absent. Try to diversify and shoot with as many photographers as you can. Your port currently is a mish mash of facebook style and those bike pictures diminishing the port. Put plain headshots and photos that shows hair done and make up. experiment with different hair style, accessorize and acquire more wardrobe try to focus on whatever market segment you want to target. Avoid CAPITALIZATION on your mm profile page. Your way of marketing yourself is coming across as pompous and confrontational. You want to be busy? change it or expect to be skipped.
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Connor Saxon Blue
Posts: 25
San Diego, California, US
Id appreciate your opinion!
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