Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Laura Bello wrote: Lemme know  First impressions: Excellent work Profile usefulness: informative Your Skill level: very experienced Your money shot: thank you photoshop Your Creativity: Model inspired Your Work focus: Variety What I like: Although her hair appears unnatural Verdict: Solid work
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
BT Imagery wrote: Sounds fun! all links point to +18 photos First impressions: Average work with some good ideas Profile usefulness: generic blah blah Your Skill level: Hobbyist Prosumer Your Creativity: Your Work focus: Beauty Keep shooting , nothing to list at this time
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Photographer
kschruder
Posts: 85
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
Wow your reviews are very thorough! I wouldn't mind some feedback, if you're willing 
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
CinnamonKisses wrote: Oh my! I wonder what my best one is First impressions: Average next door girl look Profile usefulness: useful Your Skill level: starting newbie Pluses: ethnic look Your money shot: It is the best of the bunch and nothing to list at this time. Verdict: Delete everything start over, find good photographers and elaborate theme shoots.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Model
Azlyn
Posts: 35
Spartanburg, South Carolina, US
I'm always looking for critiques so I can better myself and my work. I'm eager to know your opinion. 
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Rik Williams wrote: Please do  all links point to +18 photos Profile usefulness: To the point Worthy of paid assignments: Yes First impressions: I see talent, perseverance, effectiveness. Your Skill level: Advanced Your money shot: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26491979 and Your Creativity: is seen in art nudes Your Noteworthy Technique: great control on light Your Work focus: Primarily as Art and fashion nudes What I like: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28658425 listed Verdict: Super job, keep shooting!
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
kookykatkay wrote: Me please Unable to show profile #3323474 This member is either awaiting approval or has removed their profile from the site.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
christianjbarry wrote: Please let me know thank you so much! Sorry Christian your port looks like face book or dating site content I see nothing there to make me want to shoot you. Other then those below dump everything and start over.
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Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Rachel Maren wrote: Curious!  First impressions: Gorgeous sweet look Worthy of paid assignments: yes Profile usefulness: somewhat useful Your Skill level: intermediate Your money shot: Your Work focus: Art and fashion What I like: Verdict: Stunning look and a lot of potential for broad range of work.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Annie S wrote: Me! Would like as much help as I can get! Thanks! First impressions: newbie, girl next door Worthy of paid assignments:No Profile usefulness: minimal Your Skill level: starting Pluses: Cute look Your money shot: Challenges: Same expression and look in all pictures in port Your Work focus: still exploring What I like: listed What to delete: first row 4 photos Verdict: Work harder, learn posing
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Eric SUN wrote: Me,thanks. Profile usefulness: Exhaustive, Couldn't finish reading all. Worthy of paid assignments:Yes First impressions: Overall positive Your Skill level: some good techniques What to delete: example of bad cropping and failed concept Verdict: Your best hands down ![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131217/19/52b113a3d69b0_m.jpg]()
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Nicola Lea wrote: Yes Please! First impressions: Girl next door. Worthy of paid assignments:Nope Profile usefulness: minimal Your Skill level: newbie Pluses: none Your money shot: none Challenges: many Your Work focus: no clue What I like: What to delete: top 2 row 8 photos, most dark and show only about 1/4 of your face. Overall bad portfolio Recommendations: rip everything and restart. Find a photographer and learn to pose. Focus on a genre.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
ThomasStudio wrote: I'd love your opinion of my port. I'm moving into this space, so any and all feedback is appreciated. Thank you in advance! all links point to +18 photos Profile usefulness: Useful Worthy of paid assignments:yes First impressions: good technical skills, good bw work Your Skill level: Advanced Your money shot: Your Creativity: model driven, try to coach better your models. Your Work focus: drifting towards nude art Verdict: Lingerie boudoirs don't have any impact. Your composition needs work. most of Chantel series bored me to tears. Excitement lacks in most of your work -- > You do a lot better with male subjects.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Black Tux Photography wrote: Hit me all links point to +18 photos Profile usefulness: nothing in there Worthy of paid assignments: yes First impressions: you are fooling around Your Skill level: average in shooting, better on post Your Work focus: anything on sight What I like: ![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140429/08/535fc779b65d0_m.jpg]() Verdict: Other then the two I have indicated, nothing grabs me. Keep shooting.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Mochrum Photography wrote: What the hell, feel free to give an opinion when you have the time. Profile usefulness: somewhat useful Worthy of paid assignments:Nope First impressions: Boring port Your Skill level: Novice Your Creativity: limited Your Work focus: alternative, fetish etc, but the bad news is that you are not coming even close. What I like: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35176514 What to delete: All hi key photographs. They are a miss. Recommendations: Redo port Next Step: Work on your lighting Verdict: You can do a lot better. Coach better the models. They are very passive looking.
Model
Manadis
Posts: 3
Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands
I don't have a lot of experience yet so I'd love to hear what you have to say 
Model
Raj Dave gqstyles
Posts: 35
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US
I would like your feedback, and if you can give suggestions for the next photoshoot I would appreciate that. Thanks so much!
Photographer
Dibuho Photography
Posts: 27
Washington, District of Columbia, US
Very interested to know your thoughts... let me have it! 
Model
Steve_S89
Posts: 1
Nashville, Tennessee, US
I'd be interested in your opinion. Thanks.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Babybean wrote: I'd love some feedback! Profile usefulness: Useful Worthy of paid assignments:yes First impressions: amateur who made up her mind Your Skill level: beginner Your Work focus: a good fit for potentially everything What I like: Bottom line: Beautiful look and features that should attract many shooters. nothing to list at this time.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
SScilasi wrote: I'd be interested in your opinion. Thanks. Interesting look but too many of the same kind of photos in your port. My FAV too many static images, no action. Keep shooting and don't just stare at the camera. Good physique is noted.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
gqstyles wrote: I would like your feedback, and if you can give suggestions for the next photoshoot I would appreciate that. Thanks so much! Nothing earth shattering, your port is full of facebook style snapshots. will not even inspire anybody to test you. Your next photo shoot should include some action or show off some additional skills you may have. If not do a suit and tie look business executive look.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Manadis wrote: I don't have a lot of experience yet so I'd love to hear what you have to say  Profile usefulness: yes Worthy of paid assignments: yes First impressions: Gorgeous look, untamed beauty like rough diamond Your Skill level: basic, photographer driven Pluses: eager and willing type Your money shot: Note: any links point to +18 photos Profile usefulness: Worthy of paid assignments: First impressions: Your Skill level: Pluses: Your money shot: Note: any links point to +18 photos Profile usefulness: somewhat Worthy of paid assignments: yes First impressions: newbie girl next door Your Skill level: basic Your money shot: Challenges: same stare in most photos. Your Work focus: still guessing What I like: but belongs more in the photographer's port. Verdict: add more looks, find good people to work with.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Photographer
kschruder
Posts: 85
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
varton wrote: Profile usefulness: yes Worthy of paid assignments: yes First impressions: quite generic port, I would probably forget I have visited it tomorrow. Your Skill level: intermediate to advanced Thanks for the feedback! I've only been doing this a few months, so I'm definitely still practicing and trying to find my "unique style".
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
Azlyn wrote: I'm always looking for critiques so I can better myself and my work. I'm eager to know your opinion.  Profile usefulness: useful Worthy of paid assignments: yes First impressions: serious beginner Your Skill level: basic Pluses: cute look, easy typecast Your money shot: out of focus though Challenges: finding a good photographer? shouldn't be! Your Work focus: mainstream, probably more commercial What I like: spontaneous feel Bottom line: Focus on serious projects and gather a team. Good luck
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2749
New York, New York, US
International2014 wrote: I'm in! Profile usefulness: somewhat Worthy of paid assignments: No First impressions: Beginner Your Skill level: Basic to intermediate Your money shot: Your Work focus: Pretty girls Verdict: Improve your composition and light. Watch your crops.
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