Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Josesote wrote: I would love some feedback! Thanks! First impressions: Nice range of captures, great skills Your Skill level: better then average Your creativity: model driven Specific style: vanilla, but grabs the attention Your Work focus: creative portraits and great locations Your MM Profile usefulness: basic and comes across as unambitious. Your challenges: getting to the next level Paid assignments: yes Your money shot: What I like: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41297912 What to delete: Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: work with artificial light as well and diversify your port. Do you make my list?: no
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
l y n n e wrote: I would love to hear your thoughts. First impressions: Amazing beauty Your Skill level: does well for most figure art shoots and mild fetish Your creativity: photographer driven Specific style: you are a great fit for fetish/ bondage genre Your Work focus: art nudes Your MM Profile usefulness: useful Paid assignments: yes Your money shot: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21723292 +18 with subtle nudity What I like: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21760950 What to delete: Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: you will do great! add more fashion to the port Do you make my list?: this could be the one but shoulder too high, and not like much the arched posing but great camera connection. Instead I listed this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21744623 +18 Awesome!
Model
Doee
Posts: 19
New York, New York, US
Feedback would be great, thank you!
Photographer
Natural Means
Posts: 936
Yamba, New South Wales, Australia
Hi mate, I'd appreciate a preci of my work. Many thanks.
Model
Kyrstiann Dynae
Posts: 3
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Do me! I'm pretty New so if I could be doing things better I wanna know!
Model
Kyrstiann Dynae
Posts: 3
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Do me! I'm pretty New so if I could be doing things better I wanna know!
Model
Spookie
Posts: 10
Kassel, Hassia, Germany
Me as well please!! ^_^ thank you!
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
l y n n e wrote: I would love to hear your thoughts. First impressions: good eye for beauty Your Skill level: not enough photos to gauge skills Your creativity: somewhat creative Specific style: still searching Your Work focus: beauty art expressions Your MM Profile usefulness: short to the point Paid assignments: yes Your money shot: but not sure if the tilt is on purpose that would augment our viewing experience. What I like: nice capture of emotion What to delete: none Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: keep up the good work Do you make my list?: yes
Photographer
Jun Weaver Photography
Posts: 153
Seattle, Washington, US
varton wrote: First impressions: good eye for beauty Your Skill level: not enough photos to gauge skills Your creativity: somewhat creative Specific style: still searching Your Work focus: beauty art expressions Your MM Profile usefulness: short to the point Paid assignments: yes Your money shot: but not sure if the tilt is on purpose that would augment our viewing experience. What I like: nice capture of emotion What to delete: none Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: keep up the good work Do you make my list?: yes Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to look through and offer your feedback.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Nickpoli wrote: I'd be keen for some feedback First impressions: thinking outside of the box (but that's also become a cliche) Your Skill level: above average Your creativity: Specific style: mysterious Your Work focus: out of ordinary Your MM Profile usefulness: now we know you don't shoot glamor porn, great! Your challenges: trying to define the genre you want to focus on Paid assignments: yes Your money shot: What I like: Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You created your own style but I am not sure they come across with the impact you are trying to create. I don't find your "male sub" compositions much of interest as an art form just the way imaged. however The "disturbing factor" you want there is indeed present with full effect. Do you make my list?: no
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
April Elaine wrote: Take a peek - I'd love to know if anything stands out! First impressions: Curves stand out definitely Your Skill level: good Specific style: multi, looks like you have no preference Your Work focus: predominantly leaning to beauty glamour Your MM Profile usefulness: to the point Your challenges: your gaze to the camera doesn't vary a lot. Paid assignments: yes Your money shot: what a shame it is cropped too tight What I like: I like body taping better then body painting, in this case tedious but looks awesome What to delete: keep either color or BW version of the same photos, you can ditch all the night photos with the dress and just keep this one Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: you have too many redundant look of same photos in same outfits, not only they don't add much to the port but become a distracting factor for someone who has to scroll a lot to find what he would be interested in seeing. You would do great in pinups and fashion. Do you make my list?: no
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Cynthia Serrano wrote: First impressions: Tough girl! but can be feminine and sensual, I like that Your Skill level: fairly efficient Your creativity: some great ideas are noted. Specific style: dark non conformist alternative Your Work focus: entertaining and fun stuff Your MM Profile usefulness: useful but indicate if you have short or long hair Paid assignments: yes What I like: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41134697 Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: chances are your port will lock you to a limited genre modeling, to avoid that add more main stream concepts. Do you make my list?: no
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Geoffrey Pereira
Posts: 40
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore
Please critique my port, too. Thanks.
Photographer
Brian Egendorf
Posts: 305
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US
I'd love to see what you have to say about my image(s)! My selection here is kind of limited and slightly geared toward alt and adult work.. But I have a lot more on Instragram as MainFragger if you are so inclined to check those out..
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Nostromo Images wrote: I would love it if you could spare the time; absolutely looking forward to your feedback! all pic links obviously +18 First impressions: mostly nudes Your Skill level: above average Your creativity: in this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/40527352 works for me Specific style: exploratory Your Work focus: tasty nudes Your MM Profile usefulness: pretty generic wording Your challenges: better direct models https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41544109 Paid assignments: yes Your money shot: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/40946942 What I like: but too much yellow hue for my taste What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41600379 faked shadows and bad retouch Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: you have some strong and some weak photos in your port, perhaps you could consolidate and reduce your image count. Your nudes has some artistic trends but because I find in general the best artistic nudes somewhat boring, static and redundant in most portfolios I wouldn't bother to elaborate. Your light in studio/indoor settings is a bit flat, outdoor nudes at the border line as art. Do you make my list?: no but if you had this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/39317145 shot in the middle of a big hall furnished in french baroque style I would.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Julian W I L D E wrote: You are Tireless! I gotta give this a go! First impressions: top shelf photographer Your Skill level: great Your creativity: Very creative Specific style: mismash between Vogue and Playboy Your Work focus: Glamorous Women Your MM Profile usefulness: useful and loud. Paid assignments: yes and well worth Your money shot: too many to mention Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: All my compliments, not much to say other then perhaps you should also photograph glamorous men out there. Do you make my list?: yes if you didn't opt out, great light, texture and wardrobe sophistication and amazing model
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Doee wrote: Feedback would be great, thank you! First impressions: Nice classy look Your Skill level: beginner Your creativity: photographer driven Specific style: fashion Your Work focus: should be commercials Your MM Profile usefulness: basic Your challenges: posing Paid assignments: no Your money shot: What to delete: other then the one I spotted no other photo works to your advantage Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: you have a big competition, you need to reinvent yourself. Your port is too static. Do you make my list?: no
Photographer
Rays Fine Art
Posts: 7504
New York, New York, US
I'd appreciateyour thoughts, Thanks!
Photographer
Ken Shutter
Posts: 183
Gainesville, Florida, US
I'd appreciate your review, my first ever request to a impartial third party.
Photographer
Ken Marcus Studios
Posts: 9421
Las Vegas, Nevada, US
Can't believe you are still offering your critiques . . . . Please count me in, when you get a chance. KM
Model
EdWin
Posts: 24
Los Angeles, California, US
I would love this, my turn please.
Photographer
Nostromo Images
Posts: 15
Asheville, North Carolina, US
Thank you so much for taking the time! I sincerely appreciate it!
Photographer
Xipher81
Posts: 3
Los Angeles, California, US
Hello I am looking to get into Fashion Photography. I would like a real life review of my images. Any input on how to improve would be greatly appreciated.
Model
TylerJean
Posts: 1
Thousand Oaks, California, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Ken Marcus Studios wrote: Can't believe you are still offering your critiques . . . . Please count me in, when you get a chance. KM It would be truly an honor Ken, as soon as I clear the backlog. I have to tell you that I am a big fan of your work since 1993 I will try to do a good job even though everyone knows your signature is the very definition of perfection. Keep up the great work! Best regards - Varton.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Natural Means
Posts: 936
Yamba, New South Wales, Australia
Model
Grace Jagger
Posts: 1
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Me please
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Kyrstiann Dynae wrote: Do me! I'm pretty New so if I could be doing things better I wanna know! First impressions: lovely model and a good fit for commercial and casual fashion Your Skill level: beginner Your creativity: photographer driven Your Work focus: fashion beauty Your MM Profile usefulness: will do the job Your challenges: face expressions more suitable for beauty, keep eye contact neutral in fashion Paid assignments: very soon Your money shot: feet was cut off What I like: Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: work with more photographers,you are on a good track. Do you make my list?: no
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
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