Mar 03 13 06:34 pm Link Leone P wrote: I would say maybe. I'm not completely sold- the pose is not great and your expression looks forced/not comfortable and does not connect with the camera. But the outfit looks good on you and I like your tights as well. Also like the necklace- you pull off the look well. Hair is nice though would use a different color bow, as the red doesn't go with anything. Mar 03 13 07:02 pm Link Emily Smiles wrote: Yes. You have a really nice figure that is captured well in this image. The pose looks good as well and I also like the bikni top, with bottom. And the background is very pretty- nice colors and great location choice. Also love how your body is reflected in the water on the ground. Mar 04 13 12:50 pm Link MandiePistol wrote: Yes. The outfit looks great on you (I like the tulle skirt part too) and shows off your figure really well. Also the pose is lovely- looks effortless and graceful. I also really like the style of your hair and how it's framed around your face. And you have gorgeous eyes and nice makeup- especially the red lips. Perhaps the expression could be a bit more engaging though. Mar 04 13 08:28 pm Link What do you think? Should I change it? Mar 05 13 09:08 am Link Hi. I'm curious. Thanks Mar 05 13 11:56 am Link NatesStream wrote: Maybe, though the background and overall image is a bit too dark for my tastes. But I do like the scarf and the way it is draped over the model's body and covering most of the top part, while still showing a little bit. Pose is pretty good, but don't like that the model's face is covered by her hair -- Would like to see more of the face and expression. Mar 05 13 08:15 pm Link this sounds fun! Mar 05 13 08:19 pm Link Curious... Mar 05 13 09:27 pm Link Matt Forma wrote: Yes. This is a strong and beautiful shot- Love the movement in the model's hair - Also like the styling and color of it. And the model herself is gorgeous -- high fashion face with great structure and lovely blue eyes. The scarf is nicely arranged on the model and pose is okay- not liking the arms though. Mar 05 13 09:34 pm Link Do tell. Mar 06 13 01:13 am Link Xplicit Impressions wrote: Maybe. I actually want to pose with a motorcycle, but this image shows the model well but doesn't really engage the motorcycle- Makes me wonder if it has to be there at all. The bikini is nice though and definitely shows off the model's figure - Pose is decent but arms are covering/shadowing part of the model's face. The expression is okay. I just don't like the crop at the bottom- you've cropped out the shoes. Nice background and natural lighting though. Mar 06 13 09:36 am Link Foxy Tokala wrote: Probably yes but the first thing I notice is that your expression is sleepy/dead- and one eye is almost closed- Not good! Try to have more connection with the camera. Beyond that, I like your dress- it looks great on you and shows off your figure well. The pose is also quite good. Your hair looks okay but could be more smooth/polished (like here: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31782887), especially to match that lovely dress. Mar 06 13 08:16 pm Link if youre still going Im curious Mar 06 13 08:34 pm Link Smitty s Photography wrote: No. There's a strange gritty feel to the image and color tone is off. But the outfit looks great on the model -especially the shirt and heels. The shirt color is nice but the cut doesn't go with the skirt. Pose is okay, though can't see the left hand and the background is nice and smooth- Why couldn't the model be smooth like that? Mar 07 13 09:40 am Link Mae Martin wrote: Maybe. I don't love that your arm is blocking your face, creating a shadow there. I would like to see the pretty flowers around your head better but love your smile - looks genuine. And the way you've made a curved shape of your stomach looks great- The image captures your nice figure. That being said, I can still tell from the image that you're just starting out -- Keep shooting! Mar 07 13 01:35 pm Link winking_wonder wrote: Ok thank you for the feedback, I will try really hard to work on that. I am also trying to work with my hair to as you have noticed, some days I have harder times with my hair than others lol Mar 07 13 07:05 pm Link Foxy Tokala wrote: You're welcome for the feedback. I know it can be hard to give great expressions and can understand about the hair as well but keep up the good work! Mar 07 13 07:56 pm Link would you? Mar 08 13 07:05 am Link Mar 08 13 09:14 am Link Curious... Mar 08 13 09:57 am Link Envied Images wrote: Yes. I really like the red dress with the belt and shoes, plus it all looks great on the model- shows off her figure. The pose is interesting but expression doesn't look comfortable and there's no connection with the camera. Mar 08 13 10:27 am Link Leah YI wrote: I would say I might.. I think the expression could be improved- there's no connection/emotion there but I like the makeup on you and love how your hair is flowing behind you. And I like the white top on you. Though placement of hand right in front of you isn't the best pose. Mar 09 13 05:00 pm Link Keith Aleksoff wrote: Yes. I would love to have that type of shot in my portfolio- I'm looking to add couples style shoots. I like the color scheme and love the sexy feel to it. Both models are good looking and have decent expressions. I think the female model's left arm (the one on the male model's shoulder) is a bit distracting- it looks big.. Would've liked it better if it wasn't in the shot. Otherwise, I love it! Mar 09 13 06:48 pm Link I'll jump in! Mar 09 13 06:56 pm Link HEY CHECK OUT MY PAGE LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU ALL THINK https://www.facebook.com/HoratioPhotos Mar 09 13 08:42 pm Link Give it to me straight! Mar 10 13 01:08 am Link I'm very interested in your opinion. Mar 10 13 01:21 pm Link OK. What do you think? https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31925142 Mar 11 13 04:22 am Link I'll play Mar 11 13 10:00 am Link Justen Altschul wrote: Yes. I think you look good and I like your bone structure and eyes- would like to know what color they are! Though the expression is kind of blank. But jacket is nice, your pose is all right. The arrow/lines with light blue on them are interesting and kind of cool. Mar 11 13 12:07 pm Link Kuisheid wrote: Yes. Though the background is a little busy, I like colorful and I like your look- You've got lovely hair - love the curl in it and love the part and you also have pretty eyes. Nice earrings too The expression is a little tense but getting there. Also not sure about the pose. Also like that your face/hair is very smooth. Mar 11 13 08:16 pm Link Mar 12 13 12:54 pm Link SophiaRed wrote: Maybe. I like your red hair and green eyes. Expression is quite blank though. And though I like the shirt as a whole, placement of arm across your front is maybe not the best pose. Mar 13 13 11:30 am Link Your opinion please Thank You Mar 13 13 04:10 pm Link I'd like to know Mar 14 13 08:52 am Link Mar 14 13 11:19 am Link Kuisheid wrote: Already done: https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st18101216 Mar 14 13 06:23 pm Link Sure I would love to know what you think Mar 14 13 06:24 pm Link Viral Photo wrote: I would say maybe. It's a little over processed and the model's expression is not very good but the outfit she has on is really creative, sexy and she looks good in it. The belly button ring is a nice added touch. But her pose is just there, with the right arm being awkward. Mar 14 13 08:25 pm Link |