Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Lilith Von Dahlia wrote:
Me please. smile

Yes. I like your overall look - Also nice styling. Great outfit and makeup. I also enjoy your hair style. The black feathers surrounding you is a bit much though and your expression looks blank/faraway- I would love it more if it was more emotive.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120706/06/4ff6e8df6d6d0_m.jpg

Sep 30 13 08:56 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

MissGoldenarrow wrote:
Me too please!

No. I don't really like the white hair - it looks unnatural and the pose isn't great- especially placement of arm and straight on shot of your face- It would look more flattering if your face was at an angle. Would've liked to see more of you but the tree stump seems to overpower this image. Also, expression should be more connected.. I do like the outfit you have on though.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130712/14/51e06e7a080e0_m.jpg

Sep 30 13 09:13 pm Link

Photographer

erics_Toronto_GTA

Posts: 5176

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Mine pls.
Thanks in advance.

Sep 30 13 09:22 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Lauren Arcadia wrote:
I'm game

Yes. I like the color scheme and your posing is well done. Nice smooth skin tone and lovely display of your figure. However, your hair and makeup could be more polished. Expression is pretty good.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120815/02/502b6a291b847_m.jpg

Oct 01 13 01:30 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

mjjay wrote:
New to the game, but definitely in the game..

Probably not. While I like the outfit you have on - I don't like the quality of the image and your skin tone especially face looks off. Also expression is kind of blank- There's no connection with the camera.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130917/23/523949dfe3689_m.jpg

Oct 01 13 01:47 pm Link

Photographer

Keeys

Posts: 15

Bradley, Illinois, US

go take a look and tell me what you think...

Oct 01 13 02:11 pm Link

Photographer

Dan OMell

Posts: 1415

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

please

Oct 01 13 02:13 pm Link

Photographer

Sunny Foto

Posts: 249

London, England, United Kingdom

I'm curious as well.

Oct 01 13 02:54 pm Link

Model

VeronicaB

Posts: 97

San Francisco, California, US

thanks!

Oct 01 13 10:13 pm Link

Photographer

Location Photography

Posts: 36

Paducah, Kentucky, US

I'd love to..but remember: I'm just a hobbyist.  smile

Oct 02 13 12:33 am Link

Model

melissa brouwers

Posts: 25

Bree, Limburg, Belgium

Tell me!

Oct 02 13 09:25 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Matrix Mark wrote:
Wondering... work with me?

Yes. I like the lighting and color scheme though the background is a little bit too busy and blurry. Model looks pretty- nice hair and facial features. The pose is a little boring though and expression should have more connection to camera.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130919/20/523bc567589ee_m.jpg

Oct 02 13 12:28 pm Link

Model

Meghan Noelle

Posts: 115

Houston, Texas, US

I wanna try:)

Oct 02 13 01:51 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

H Choi wrote:
I'm down for this.

Maybe. It's an okay image but there's a bit of blurriness in it that I don't like. I really like the model's shirt- pretty color and material and she has really nice hair and soft makeup that looks great. However, the posing is boring as is the background and the expression is sort of lost - no connection to the camera.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130918/21/523a78d68e4e0_m.jpg

Oct 02 13 02:27 pm Link

Photographer

Chris Jabbal

Posts: 68

Irvine, California, US

Ok, will you or won't you...

Oct 02 13 03:55 pm Link

Photographer

Beautifully Soft Focus

Posts: 533

Plano, Texas, US

Would love to know smile

Oct 02 13 04:08 pm Link

Photographer

Mystery Man Photography

Posts: 28

London, Ontario, Canada

Maybe yes, Maybe no?
Tips are appreciated

Oct 02 13 10:46 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Kortney Kesha wrote:
I'll play smile

No. This shot is obviously a snap shot, though I do like your dress and hair. The way you're posed could be better especially placement of arms and legs but the slight curve of your back looks good. Also the way your leg is cut off at the bottom of the image isn't great and your legs look disproportionately smaller. Your expression is okay but seems like the smile doesn't reach your eyes. Also background is not the best.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130824/13/5219137bb40e8_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130907/12/522b79cd25c11_m.jpg

Oct 03 13 06:52 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

ChelseaChee wrote:
Yes, please....

I would say yes. I like the background and color scheme. Also love your hair style and the way it frames your face. Nice facial features and makeup too. Pose is pretty good though expression could be more engaged.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130918/01/523960a000957_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130514/19/5192f5c844260_m.jpg

Oct 03 13 08:14 am Link

Model

Amelia Vane

Posts: 93

Somerville, Massachusetts, US

New avatar, would love to know

Oct 03 13 08:20 am Link

Model

Vani

Posts: 25

Manila, National Capital Region, Philippines

Will you?

Oct 03 13 10:14 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Peter Jo wrote:
What about mine?

Yes. Even though the image is quite dark, you have a handsome manly look and I do like the texture and detail in the image. Also appears that you have a good physique. Nice strong facial features and emotive expression as well. Pose could be better though- especially placement of right arm

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110701/07/4e0ddaa5a136d_m.jpg

Oct 03 13 12:47 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Tremmy wrote:
I'm back again smile

I would say maybe. I like the outfit- looks smart and fits you well. I also like the red roses in your hair, but your expression isn't good- it's quite blank and your mouth is open. Try to connect with the camera more. Also not sure I like the bird feathers on your shoulders. And the pose is a bit boring.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130921/00/523d4610ac9c0_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130314/12/5142224cf4036_m.jpg

Oct 03 13 01:26 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Brittany Waldron wrote:
I'll give it a go

No. This is very clearly a snap shot of you and it's not very good. It looks blurry and distorted. Your hair looks a bit messy though I do like the cut. While you have big eyes, the expression is very blank- should be more connected to the camera. Cute necklace though.

Better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130916/08/523728bfcc778_m.jpg

Oct 03 13 01:39 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

juliarabkin wrote:
me too

Yes. Even though the image is a bit small, I like the setting and color scheme. The dress on the model looks great- especially like the feeling of movement/flow and the pose is sort of regal, stately. Expression could be more engaged though.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130119/17/50fb43e26c713_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130922/10/523f23c0e33ba_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120920/15/505b96a8c201a_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8388745 18+

Oct 03 13 06:56 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Becky Ward wrote:
What about mine?

Becky x

I would say yes. I like the color scheme and you have a lovely delicate look. Nice smooth skin, beautiful freckles and facial features, nice hair style. I also like your outfit and the faraway expression you have.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130619/05/51c19e6b1ca0b_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130805/01/51ff67888dd90_m.jpg

Oct 03 13 08:05 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

courtney virginia  wrote:
Go for it

Yes. The image is very flattering- slightly sensual, graceful pose. Nice black and white tones - and great showing off your figure. Lovely lighting on your face and like your long curly locks. And the expression is good- emotive.

Oct 03 13 09:17 pm Link

Photographer

Charles JS

Posts: 5

Vught, Noord-Brabant, Netherlands

I'd appreciate your comment on mine too. - I'm here to learn ;-)

Oct 04 13 12:15 am Link

Model

Marla Pandora

Posts: 2815

Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom

Curious smile

Oct 04 13 12:53 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Mr Rod P wrote:
OK, I am in!

I'm not sure. This is not really my type of image but the model has a pretty classy look.. Nice makeup and hair but the posing is lost on me. But the lighting and color tone is lovely. So I'll say maybe.

Nice:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33786330 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32090809 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32090790 18+

Oct 04 13 08:34 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

DFTBA Photography  wrote:
Giving this a try - im still starting out so please be gentle.

I would say yes. I like the composition and the background. Also the color scheme is cool. The model's dress is lovely and overall the pose is good and the model's expression is cute.

Oct 06 13 12:23 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Hardy Yuen wrote:
i'm in smile

Maybe. I think the expression should be more engaged- It looks blank at the moment and the slight squint of the eyes is not flattering. But I like the model's overall look - pale blond hair and the way it frames the model's face, blue eyes and other facial features are lovely. Nice color scheme as well.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130923/08/5240647cb54d7_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130519/03/5198a3109aeba_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120208/07/4f329ac1c085a_m.jpg


https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130519/03/5198a39aaa0fc_m.jpg

Oct 06 13 12:59 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

RON IMAGES EDITED wrote:
Would you????

Yes. I like the smooth effect (though skin looks a bit *too* smooth) and the color scheme. Very cool blue on the skin and post editing though not sure what the goggles are for..

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120507/14/4fa843d036664_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120929/22/5067d8a645f6c_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130130/14/5109a3f6d84b8_m.jpg

Oct 06 13 08:45 pm Link

Model

AlyssaVibes

Posts: 6

Los Angeles, California, US

winking_wonder wrote:
Simply what the subject states. If no, I might let you know which photo I like better (if any).

Open to everyone: Photographers, models, MUA, retouchers etc


Note: It may take a few days, but I *will* get to you.

wink When you get a chance love.

Oct 06 13 09:17 pm Link

Model

PIp Grimlock

Posts: 15

BORING, Maryland, US

Oct 06 13 09:19 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Ruqya wrote:
probably not..but i will try anyway.. smile

Probably not. I think the skin tone of your skin color is off and while the makeup and color of your dress is nice, the expression is very blank- should be more engaged.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130916/06/52370c5bf29a4_m.jpg

Oct 07 13 09:49 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

mike_lsy wrote:
Would you work with me?

I would say maybe. I like the warm feel of the image and the color scheme. The window background is cool and model looks good in the outfit and with the tattoo! You have captured her figure well, but the posing could be more dynamic. The expression too needs some work- Would be nice to see a faraway expression as she gazes out the window.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130828/10/521e376edd052_m.jpg

Oct 08 13 09:22 am Link

Photographer

mlsy

Posts: 59

London, England, United Kingdom

winking_wonder wrote:

I would say maybe. I like the warm feel of the image and the color scheme. The window background is cool and model looks good in the outfit and with the tattoo! You have captured her figure well, but the posing could be more dynamic. The expression too needs some work- Would be nice to see a faraway expression as she gazes out the window.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130828/10/521e376edd052_m.jpg

appreciate your opinion. took you a while to get to me, and i probably changed my avatar right before you got to it. thanks again and keep up the good work

Oct 08 13 11:37 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Astira Jones wrote:
Curious ahaha

I would say yes. I like the soft warm glow in the image and you look lovely. Nice hair (love how it surrounds your face), facial features. Also great posing and sexy bikini top that shows off your figure a bit. The expression looks a little blank/bored though- Would like to see a more engaged expression.

Like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130929/16/5248bca0deea5_m.jpg

Oct 08 13 12:21 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Ella Wilkes Photography wrote:
Would you?

No. The colors are washed out, image is overall a little blurry and the placement of model in the image isn't great. Although I do like the outfit, the pose looks like the model is just standing there and the expression is not very good.. Model looks perplexed.

Oct 08 13 12:44 pm Link