Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Photographer

ShapeTheLight

Posts: 270

Garner, North Carolina, US

Ill Play...

Jul 29 14 09:39 pm Link

Model

Ms Amanda LePore

Posts: 43

Leonardtown, Maryland, US

winking_wonder wrote:

So sorry it took so long to get to you! I think this was the image:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140603/20/538e96409a339_m.jpg

Right! Thank you smile No problem about getting to me; people have lives outside of the computer. Maybe smile Haha.

Jul 31 14 09:35 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

amandalepore wrote:

Right! Thank you smile No problem about getting to me; people have lives outside of the computer. Maybe smile Haha.

Haha, thank you for understanding! smile

Jul 31 14 02:25 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Ultraviolet wrote:
me?

Yes! I love the color scheme here and the lighting/composition of the shot. The model looks sexy- great pose and expression.

Jul 31 14 02:26 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Dwayne D wrote:
Me?

Yes. Very strong image and you have a great presence. Even with the black lace covering part of your face, I can tell that you are quite handsome. You've got nice features and seems like a good physique. The bow is a nice touch and you are very expressive/full of life. Nicely done!

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140708/17/53bc89f000ce3_m.jpg

Jul 31 14 06:57 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

dbphotonc wrote:
I want to play!

Yes. I like the way you've captured the model, though not loving his expression (kind of looks like he's squinting) I like the smoothness and the background though.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140529/21/53880915a0140_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140529/21/53880bb12f431_m.jpg

Jul 31 14 07:55 pm Link

Model

AubreyAnn88

Posts: 12

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Would you??? smile

Jul 31 14 08:26 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Nicholas Luke wrote:
I'm Game, I could use all the help that I can get, thanks

I'm not sure. The pose is awkward and the expression is not very engaging. I do like her makeup and facial features though.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140201/21/52edd7d515fd0_m.jpg

Jul 31 14 08:47 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Slawee wrote:
And me? smile

Yes. Really like the black and white tones of the image and this is a great capture of you, especially your figure. You have a handsome look and good posing/expression.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140618/14/53a2058b22fd0_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140427/11/535d4a7377e89_m.jpg

Aug 07 14 08:52 am Link

Model

Ms Katie Blair

Posts: 95

Kaiserslautern, Rhineland-Palatinate, Germany

Me....

Aug 07 14 09:05 am Link

Photographer

Robert Hare Photography

Posts: 81

Worcester, Massachusetts, US

Let me know :-)

Aug 07 14 09:09 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Justin Micah wrote:
pick me

I would say yes. I love your physique and you have a very handsome face. Pose could be more dynamic but expression is good- emotive. Nice background/location as well.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140717/06/53c7cc3aef4aa_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140717/06/53c7cbe6d3838_m.jpg

Aug 07 14 09:14 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Nerdscarf wrote:
I'm game!

I would say probably. This is not really my usual style- grittier than what I usually like but I do enjoy the color scheme and the model's makeup/style is cool. And I really like her hair. You've captured the model well.

Aug 07 14 12:55 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Lakeshore Photography wrote:
I'm game, give me what you got!

Most definitely! Love the black and white tones and this is a beautiful capture of a lovely model. Really great outfit, sexy pose and emotive expression.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140719/17/53cb0d71b8bd6_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140719/22/53cb4e45ce595_m.jpg

Aug 07 14 02:10 pm Link

Makeup Artist

Ashley Rowlands MUA

Posts: 13

West Jordan, Utah, US

Would love critque

Aug 07 14 03:56 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Crystal L wrote:
me?

The quality of the image isn't great- looks like a snap shot but I do like your look so I would say maybe. Love your long hair and color as well as your blue eyes. It would be nice to see more of your face and to see a more engaged expression.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100908/11/4c87dac1e736f_m.jpg

Aug 08 14 08:43 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Ohka wrote:
tell me smile

No it's tough to make out the image in the regular view and the shot is just not my style. Nice black and white tones though.

Better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140318/09/532876f44e4c0_m.jpg

Aug 08 14 09:34 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Zaryana Milan wrote:
I am also here wink

Yes. You have a really beautiful face and I love your facial features, makeup and hair style. The outfit you have on is lovely as well as your earrings. I also like the color scheme/background of the image. Expression could be more expressive though.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140721/14/53cd829674b31_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140721/14/53cd818147b6e_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140719/07/53ca7f4c010ec_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140719/07/53ca7eff689fc_m.jpg

Aug 09 14 04:05 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

SEAK Photography wrote:
Would love to hear your thoughts. Please take a look!

I would say maybe. I like the black and white tones but the image is slightly blurry, model seems to be too close to the camera and the expression is not great. Decent posing and really love the way the model's hair looks though.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140522/17/537e913437214_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140727/10/53d533e934d9d_m.jpg

Aug 11 14 12:33 pm Link

Photographer

T Smalls Photography

Posts: 143

Bakersfield, California, US

I'll throw my hat in the ring...

Aug 11 14 01:06 pm Link

Photographer

JohnG Las Vegas

Posts: 114

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

OK

Aug 11 14 01:10 pm Link

Model

Toya Von Wicked

Posts: 4

Greeley, Colorado, US

I will give it a go.

Aug 11 14 03:58 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Kandy Vert wrote:
Interesting Topic!!! So would you want to shoot with me??!! wink

I would say maybe. I like your overall look and posing, the black and white tones are nice but wish I could see your face more & more expression.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140625/12/53ab204cd44a0_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36589992 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35851764 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36366723 18+

Aug 11 14 07:05 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

ShootRaw wrote:
Ill Play...

Yes. I really like the color scheme, and you've captured the model's pose/figure very well. The outfit looks good on her though expression could be better.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140729/21/53d8717c78be5_m.jpg

Aug 11 14 08:17 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

AubreyAnn88 wrote:
Would you??? smile

Yes I love the color scheme and the lighting in the image and you look beautiful! That dress is lovely and I like your pose, hair, makeup etc. Great location/background as well but expression could be more engaging.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140805/12/53e12bf4f1f09_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140807/06/53e37b29edce3_m.jpg

Aug 12 14 12:26 pm Link

Photographer

Stevie D Photography

Posts: 10

Houston, Texas, US

Sure! Have at it!

Aug 12 14 12:35 pm Link

Photographer

2M1 Fotograf

Posts: 270

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

Would you consider working with me ?

Aug 12 14 12:38 pm Link

Photographer

Culturally Destitute

Posts: 551

Seattle, Washington, US

I'l play.
you game?

Aug 12 14 12:41 pm Link

Model

AubreyAnn88

Posts: 12

Atlanta, Georgia, US

winking_wonder wrote:

Yes I love the color scheme and the lighting in the image and you look beautiful! That dress is lovely and I like your pose, hair, makeup etc. Great location/background as well but expression could be more engaging.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140805/12/53e12bf4f1f09_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140807/06/53e37b29edce3_m.jpg

Thank you, and I agree, my weakness is expressions.... any advice on improving would be appreciated, thank you again smile

Aug 12 14 07:54 pm Link

Photographer

NAZM0

Posts: 63

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

why not smile

Aug 12 14 11:14 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Ms Katie Blair wrote:
Me....

I would say maybe. I think the makeup is way too thick and takes away from your natural beauty. You have lovely features and the bra looks great on you though! However, expression is quite blank.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140502/19/53645204ac21f_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140623/14/53a89776b317b_m.jpg

Aug 13 14 01:18 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Robert Hare Photography wrote:
Let me know :-)

Yes. I like the sleek, slick, smooth style. Nice styling as well- the leather jacket looks amazing on the model, as does her ponytail and shades. Decent posing as well.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140807/08/53e3993e8463e_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140707/07/53baace5d20e1_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140707/07/53baace24aa13_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120821/14/5033f88ce7da4_m.jpg

Aug 13 14 01:33 pm Link

Photographer

Mathew Smith

Posts: 2

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

This thread must be like a full time job for you!

But I'm down to play.

Aug 13 14 02:24 pm Link

Model

Mercury Messenger

Posts: 3

Livermore, California, US

Hello!

Aug 13 14 03:44 pm Link

Model

Jesslyn Kelly

Posts: 46

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

I'll play smile

Aug 13 14 06:47 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Ashley Rowlands MUA wrote:
Would love critque

Yes. I like the eyeliner, mascara and lip color- Would like to see a bit more color on the eyes though.

Aug 13 14 09:34 pm Link

Photographer

sunn fotography

Posts: 278

Hong Kong, Hong Kong, China

Let see!! smile

Aug 14 14 09:20 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

T Smalls Photography wrote:
I'll throw my hat in the ring...

Yes I really like the color scheme and the model is beautiful. Nice hair/makeup and outfit. The smooth quality of the image is cool too but her skin looks a bit too perfect. Expression is just okay.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140707/22/53bb85fb59102_m.jpg

Aug 14 14 01:26 pm Link

Model

L_Ripley

Posts: 7

Aberdeen, Scotland, United Kingdom

Me smile

Aug 14 14 02:00 pm Link

Photographer

Amul La La

Posts: 885

London, England, United Kingdom

Ooops I'm in the wrong thread, I thought this was another one, ignore me please.

Aug 15 14 02:01 am Link