Forums > Critique > Does your Avatar make me want to see your port?

Photographer

Xplicit Impressions

Posts: 22

Bloomington, Illinois, US

Do me Do Me

Feb 26 13 05:11 pm Link

Model

Foxy Tokala

Posts: 257

Atlanta, Georgia, US

I just put up a new avatar and would love your opinion smile

Feb 26 13 06:16 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Xplicit Impressions wrote:
Do me Do Me

Very sexy. 70-75% yes

Feb 26 13 07:20 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Foxy Tokala wrote:
I just put up a new avatar and would love your opinion smile

I do indeed like the shot. And your legs are gorgeous. I would say 65% yes, and IMO you have a couple others that are more attention getting

Feb 26 13 07:22 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Jorge Kreimer wrote:
How about now?

You know, I think I would. I would be curious of what type of creative in your face artwork you have produced

Feb 26 13 07:29 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

RAVELAZ wrote:
let me know! smile

I must admit that I do like the shot. You do great work. But I just don't think that there is enough pop in this shot to get my attention. I think you have others that do

Feb 26 13 07:31 pm Link

Photographer

Artistic M-oosh

Posts: 24

Brighton, England, United Kingdom

Peach Jones wrote:

This is just a personal preference for me......I am not really into the girl girl thing, so the answer would be no

Thank you for your feedback, first time for me. It's all good and your work speaks for itself, appreciating a womans lines.

Feb 26 13 07:32 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Alyssa Nicole Marie wrote:
I'm interested, tell me...

A leg that sexy will def get my attention. but is it enough to get me to look at your port? I will say 65-70% yes

Feb 26 13 07:32 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

mophotoart wrote:
always curious..Mo

the lack of color and jumbled scenery will probably make me say no

Feb 26 13 07:34 pm Link

Photographer

DOUGLASFOTOS

Posts: 10604

Los Angeles, California, US

How about Me?  What U think?  Thanks

Feb 26 13 07:34 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Brittnee McQuade wrote:
any advice is appreciated!

You are very beautiful and have some gorgeous features. use those for some killer head shots and my answer will be yes without a doubt. Right now......50/50

Feb 26 13 07:36 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

DOUGLASFOTOS wrote:
How about Me?  What U think?  Thanks

great eye catching shot. Yes

Feb 26 13 07:36 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Bethany McConaughy wrote:
I'll bite...how about mine? And if no, I'd be interested in hearing why!

I looked at your port, and I am blown away. Your figure is pretty much......dare I say........perfect! You are a fabulous model, but IMO your current avatar does not reflect your talent and beauty. Based on your current avi I would say no, which would be a shame because your port is great!

Feb 26 13 07:40 pm Link

Model

Foxy Tokala

Posts: 257

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Peach Jones wrote:

I do indeed like the shot. And your legs are gorgeous. I would say 65% yes, and IMO you have a couple others that are more attention getting

First let me say thank you, but would you mind telling me the more attention getting ones I'm very curious now.  smile

Feb 26 13 07:40 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

bow beauty wrote:
what do you think??

based on your current avi I would say no

Feb 26 13 07:42 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Foxy Tokala wrote:

First let me say thank you, but would you mind telling me the more attention getting ones I'm very curious now.  smile

I would be happy to tell you my opinion. First, you are a great model. And I think you are barely scratching the surface of what you can become. The next question I have for you is.......are you going to go to the next level........or just stay at being a "good" model. It is up to you and your goals for modeling and your commitment.

Ok, I like the current avi, but it is a bit too far away, and the lack of color hurts. I like this one a bit better:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31769358
it shows your gorgeous feminine curves and does it in a slightly mysterious yes classy way. It is a tease without being too overt. It will cause the viewer to want to see more, hence they will look at your port.

and this:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31769069
It is a good avi because it shows a great sexy tummy and your red hair. Do you know how many people just love red hair? I didn't know either actually. But IMO the first shot is better.

No matter which path you take, I wish you the best!!

Feb 26 13 07:49 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Jennifer Francesco  wrote:
I'm interested to hear what you think..?

collages usually don't work very well as an avatar. If think if you use just one of those photos......perhaps the one in the upper L of the collage, it would be more striking IMO

Feb 26 13 07:52 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Alexander Choi wrote:
I'll play!

fabulous shot, but probably not enough color and pop to get my attention in the MM avatarland.

Feb 26 13 07:53 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

EvilEmpireMedia wrote:
Roll the dice.

Relatively new to the site. Still working on developing a strong port. Life gets in the way of passion sometimes!

I like your nudes. Especially the first shot in your port. Amazingly beautiful model and I like what you did with the lighting a pose. Bravo!

Your avi is the best choice for one in your port, but it lacks a bit of color and more pop to really get attention.

I will be back to see more of your port. Please let me know when you post new shots

Feb 26 13 07:56 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

NatesStream wrote:
Hi still, learning but would like your opinion... Don't hold back now. smile

I very much like the shot, but I think the lack of color and pop will hurt your chances of being noticed. IMO you have 1 or 2 others that would serve you better as being an avatar

Feb 26 13 07:58 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

FranklinElsey wrote:
So what do you think?

I think you look very cold in that shot. I like a couple of the shots in your port, but nothing that would really be a super good avi. Get some killer shots and use your best as an avatar. Show everyone what you can do.

Good luck

Feb 26 13 08:00 pm Link

Model

Mz Muse

Posts: 287

Los Angeles, California, US

I'm very much interested in your feedback smile

Feb 26 13 08:17 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

M U S E wrote:
I'm very much interested in your feedback smile

the angle is attention getting, yet it is sleek, sexy and high quality. 60% yes

Feb 26 13 08:19 pm Link

Model

Kristyn Emily

Posts: 28

Albany, New York, US

Does it?  smile

Feb 27 13 12:35 am Link

Model

The Manning Mode

Posts: 1

London, England, United Kingdom

Joining in, does mine?

Feb 27 13 01:19 am Link

Model

Emily C

Posts: 439

New York, New York, US

Feb 27 13 01:20 am Link

Model

Foxy Tokala

Posts: 257

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Peach Jones wrote:

I would be happy to tell you my opinion. First, you are a great model. And I think you are barely scratching the surface of what you can become. The next question I have for you is.......are you going to go to the next level........or just stay at being a "good" model. It is up to you and your goals for modeling and your commitment.

Ok, I like the current avi, but it is a bit too far away, and the lack of color hurts. I like this one a bit better:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31769358
it shows your gorgeous feminine curves and does it in a slightly mysterious yes classy way. It is a tease without being too overt. It will cause the viewer to want to see more, hence they will look at your port.

and this:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31769069
It is a good avi because it shows a great sexy tummy and your red hair. Do you know how many people just love red hair? I didn't know either actually. But IMO the first shot is better.

No matter which path you take, I wish you the best!!

Thank you very much I will keep everything you said in mind and who knowa but hopefully I can get as far as I can before I get to old ha ha smile  thank you again

Sincerely,
Tokala

Feb 27 13 04:51 am Link

Model

Leone P

Posts: 515

Batley, England, United Kingdom

Do i have wha it takes? x

Feb 27 13 05:02 am Link

Model

Logan Vandekieft

Posts: 21

Charlottesville, Virginia, US

Peach Jones wrote:

I looked at your port, and I am blown away. Your figure is pretty much......dare I say........perfect! You are a fabulous model, but IMO your current avatar does not reflect your talent and beauty. Based on your current avi I would say no, which would be a shame because your port is great!

Thanks for the compliments and I'll keep that in mind ;-)

Feb 27 13 07:17 am Link

Model

Rhiannon Sheona Fields

Posts: 9

Denver, Colorado, US

Well, does it? smile

Feb 27 13 07:24 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Kristyn Emily wrote:
Does it?  smile

It is intriguing and your face is simply gorgeous.......however you have other in your port that are much better attention getters than the one you currently have.

Feb 27 13 07:46 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

CHENAYI wrote:
Joining in, does mine?

no, and I sent you a novel telling you why 
;-)

Feb 27 13 07:47 am Link

Photographer

ViciousFelinePhotography

Posts: 1

Kitchener, Ontario, Canada

? would you

Feb 27 13 08:54 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

My avi changes constantly and probably everybody is tired of seeing different images all the time in forums and announcement windows. smile
but since this thread grew so much, I think I should play too. LOL

Feb 27 13 09:19 am Link

Photographer

A Morris Photography

Posts: 56

Derby, England, United Kingdom

Hows about moi? :-)

Feb 27 13 09:28 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

-Emilyy- wrote:
Does mine?

You have fabulous beauty. But your current avi doesn't show your beauty very well. So the answer would be no. You have a couple others in your port that I think will be a much better avatar

Feb 27 13 01:42 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Leone P wrote:
Do i have wha it takes? x

I like......60% yes

Feb 27 13 01:43 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Rhiannon Sheona Fields wrote:
Well, does it? smile

very nice......yes

Feb 27 13 01:44 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

VICIOUSFELINE wrote:
? would you

even though she has very nice legs, probably not

Feb 27 13 01:46 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

varton wrote:
My avi changes constantly and probably everybody is tired of seeing different images all the time in forums and announcement windows. smile
but since this thread grew so much, I think I should play too. LOL

even though it is a great shot and very high quality, the lack of coloring will probably mean no

Feb 27 13 01:50 pm Link