Positive or negative comments please, all opinions welcome

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 4#27421084

diagonal line & gravity defying boobs are distracting

Color is off? Is that wall supposed to be white?

Well, she looks kinda dead...

Most 'glam' shots have the model 'connecting' with the viewer by looking into the camera. She ain't... She's staring off into space = no 'connection'.

and the closed lips look a bit tight like she ain't having fun...

Just my opinion