D Massey

Posts: 33

San Javier, Murcia, Spain

Hi guys,

i'm looking for some serious harsh critique, please rate me 1-10, tell me which photo is my best and my worst.

Cheers smile

Nov 07 12 07:05 am Link


Jean Renard Photography

Posts: 2170

Los Angeles, California, US

I could only rate you against what you MIGHT become if you worked with great people and did all the things you need to do to make yourself great, on that scale you'd be a 2 right now.

The shots are not great and you are not doing anything in them.  You have a solid look the short hair, with large eyes allow you to be lazy and do nothing but look back at the camera and little else.   You need to emote a lot more.

You are busty as well which is distracting for now.  Start using your facial expressions and then work towards the body language. 
Work with fashion pros and get a great make up artist.

Nov 07 12 01:30 pm Link



Posts: 9765

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

None of your photos are 10’s or 9’s  and none of them are 1’s or 2’s, so you lie some where in the middle.

In all of your images you just about have the same expression
Will call this the best from a modeling stand point
Least best
Some kind of junk to photo left of models head on wall, and at front “V” of sweater
Top makes the over all appearance as kind of a frumpy look

Wish you well

Nov 07 12 02:11 pm Link


DEP E510

Posts: 2046

Miramar, Florida, US

you have a nice face, great hair, and nice curves.

at least a 7.5

Nov 09 12 02:51 pm Link


Christina Josephine

Posts: 121

Warsaw, Indiana, US

Favorite. You have a beautiful jaw line and a really nice figure.

Nov 09 12 11:54 pm Link


Image Magik

Posts: 1515

New Orleans, Louisiana, US

You have a cute look but you need to work on your posing and facial expressions more as well as wardrobe. Right now every picture is a similar look. 2-3 at this point.

Nov 09 12 11:59 pm Link


D Massey

Posts: 33

San Javier, Murcia, Spain

Thank you all for your help! After looking through my port I also noticed that my facial expression is the same in all the photos, I will soon be adding a few more shots I have.
So when you have a chance please check my profile again and let me knpow what you think.


Nov 13 12 02:52 am Link