Axioma wrote:


this one is pretty new, may I get your opinion please ?

I think you look good, pose and expression- beautiful.

I'm not a huge fan of the angle and you being upside down
Also not digging the dark corner the floor has made on the left side

Alexander Choi wrote:



Would love an opinion on these latest works

For the first image I would prefer the models face be in focus. This lighting is super flat bump the contrast and saturation a bit maybe? Or use travel lighting /reflectors

Second image looks like a painting. And I'm no expert on under water photography but models face and pose are rather boring as well as her outfit and surroundings.and her skin is too yellow !

Foxy Tokala wrote:
How about these two the first one I'm not sure if it isn't getting much attention because people don't notice I'm actually in it or if the picture isn't as great as much as I love it.  The second one is one of my newest so would love your thoughts on it.

Ditch the first photo, literally can't see you


The second ditch too, this looks so sloppy and boring, you even look bored, bad lighting and unfocused!

RachelReilly wrote:

Ditch the first photo, literally can't see you


The second ditch too, this looks so sloppy and boring, you even look bored, bad lighting and unfocused!

Thanks!

Tim Stuart wrote:
Ok, i have only been photographing models for a short time.....only 2 have been "working" models and the rest are amateurs.....what do you think?

Your portfolio looks amateur and unpolished.

Pay closer attention to detail- models wardrobe, makeup/hair , pose and expression!!

Maybe invest in a travel light, it can really enhance outdoor shooting. Even a reflector, because the lighting looks flat and boring in your photos.

Jake Kelly wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31823389
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 9#31651705

Hope to hear your criticism!

I'm not critiquing webcam photos.
Come back when you've done an actual photoshoot

Sameer Nawaz wrote:
I'll have a go.
I'm an apiring model, so would like to know what you think?
Which one do you prefer from the new pics...

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31834088

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31845221

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31834194

I think you look the best in the last one.
That being said.. I don't enjoy any of these!
Go to some agency's and try to get signed then start testing.
I would like to see better quality photos

AndyD10 wrote:
I'm undecided about this one.  I haven't printed it, but on some screens I like it and on others it looks a bit cold and 'severe'.



Here's a warmer and softer image of the same model from a different shoot for comparison

Things that stand out: her face looks pale compared to the skin on her body, while her eyes have catch lights they are in shadows (I don't mind this but could add to the cold feeling)
And the pink strap is a bit bothersome.

I like her expression, this model is obviously gorgeous!

I think your editing and retouching look good, and perhaps you darkened the shadows a bit much and that could also add to the coldness.
But mostly like I said the skin tone in her face is off..

Looking at It on my screen it does look harsh.
Over all, lighten the shadows a tad and make her skin all one color and I think it's useable
I do wish the crop we try so tight at the bottom though

Ceci L wrote:


https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … e367c5.jpg  +18

This is a hell no. You look possessed :-/
Most awkward glamour pose ever!
You look boxed up, basically looking like a quad amputee

I think you have potential. Practice posing!!!!
And work with better photographers

Second image- i do looove the movement!!
But it lacks connection to the viewer.

The editing on this is terrible, way too orangey and wayyy over retouched!

Sally G wrote:
my port?
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/1578033/viewall

I'm a bigger fan of the black and white nudes than anything else.
Be careful of posing looking too contrived and perhaps work with better photographers!

Jorge Kreimer wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31865942 18+
"Orchid"

I love this
The composition And the whiteness of her skin.
Her hand and her expression work perfectly!

Melb Rick wrote:
What about my port?
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/2620263/viewall

Looks like you've got your hands on some good males models.. Take advantage of that!
The Calvin Klein undies.. Looks awesome, Careful thoughbc you could have chosen one with a more attractive facial expression.

The teal blanket photo looks a bit unpolished and seriously ditch the blanket!

Ditch all the photos w the female, they look way too contrived and over edited
In general keep practicing and good start.

Curtis M LeBlanc wrote:

This is a good idea but at your skill level I'm going to say keep it simple until you've mastered lighting and composition (people tell me this as well, and it helps!)
There is wayyy too much going on in this photo. I really dislike it especially the fact that her blonde hair is out ., its disturbing. Why didn't you pull get hair up into a bun or something?

Just Aly wrote:
My avatar.
and the top row of new images in my nude album
thank you

I'm sorry I don't like any of them,
You've brought nothing exciting to the table.
Boring poses  and expressions.
Also the retouching is terrible and way too much of it!
Work with better photographers as well.

Curtis M LeBlanc wrote:
My second one...thanks.

Awkward pose and crop!
Also might just be me but the tattoo portraits are weird (like too personsl)and distracting. Also distracting is her boobs are being cut in Half by her shirt

But the main thing is the retouching!! Holy heavy hand, try that again!

Matthew John  wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31883969

Ok obviously the lighting and models skin are on point!..
However her expression ruins everything!
She looks way too happy.. It just doesn't match w this dark/beautiful image.
Also Her fingers are splayed in an unattractive  way , remember delicate hands!

RachelReilly wrote:

Looks like you've got your hands on some good males models.. Take advantage of that!
The Calvin Klein undies.. Looks awesome, Careful thoughbc you could have chosen one with a more attractive facial expression.

The teal blanket photo looks a bit unpolished and seriously ditch the blanket!

Ditch all the photos w the female, they look way too contrived and over edited
In general keep practicing and good start.

I'm actually more keen on getting some good female models, but where are they??
The Calvin Klein undies, yeah I know, it's a shame, I have replaced his whole head thou, but hey the focus is on the physique.
The teal blanket - ditch the blanket, polish the model and shoot? Wait, he's Polish!
The female models, have I over edited their face, eyes or?
Thank you for your time. Appreciated.

Melb Rick wrote:

I'm actually more keen on getting some good female models, but where are they??
The Calvin Klein undies, yeah I know, it's a shame, I have replaced his whole head thou, but hey the focus is on the physique.
The teal blanket - ditch the blanket, polish the model and shoot? Wait, he's Polish!
The female models, have I over edited their face, eyes or?
Thank you for your time. Appreciated.

You are welcome.

Yeah Im not digging your choice of females and the skin looks like you edited

HEATHER 19 wrote:
1st bathing suit shoot.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33422222

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34158749

First shot: such a natural beauty!
Second: unfortunately this one is all kinds of awkward, most of all your face.
I noticed in your port you REALLY need to work on facial expressions.
You lack all emotion or you look scared/confused, screams amateur.

Drew Smith Photography wrote:
Opinion?

I like it! Really cool idea.
The Alien tthing is kind of disturbing
And I do like the processing you did in photoshop to give it that dirty look.

RachelReilly wrote:

The image is quite jarring in my opinion.
I am not a huge fan of artistic nudes so I am biased.
Aside from the actual figure I do like like light and shadow effects!

so obvious.
the photographer now has 801 views of his own package "tastefully lit" lol

jeez

kudos to the op bravery!