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Ashayla Webster

Posts: 525

Perth, Western Australia, Australia

mmmmm....weenie hut please tongue

Feb 08 13 05:27 am Link

Model

E e v a

Posts: 1724

Nashville, Tennessee, US

aliceelou012 wrote:
Weenie hut please! smile

Good: you are an extremely pretty girl with a lovely face.

Pose wise this is your best:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 6#31449005

Bad: You need to work with better photographers. Expression wise, I want you to branch away from the smirk look in your avatar. For some reason when you do that look you open your eyes far too widely, almost looking a little creepy. rellaaaaxxx. But mainly work with better photographers, since you're gorgeous.

Feb 09 13 07:49 pm Link

Model

Jem Iredale

Posts: 1769

Merrimac, Massachusetts, US

Would you mind doing me?

Feb 09 13 08:08 pm Link

Model

Mayzelle Rose

Posts: 29

Branson, Missouri, US

Weenie hut critique for me... smile

Feb 09 13 09:29 pm Link

Model

E e v a

Posts: 1724

Nashville, Tennessee, US

Angeli Li wrote:
Any bad photos/good photos in my port? smile thanks!

Your best photo is your avatar. Makes an awesome commercial shot! You look very energetic and refreshing here.

Bad:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30676902
I get you're a wardrobe stylist, but this shot shouldn't be in your modeling port.

Feb 10 13 03:02 pm Link

Model

E e v a

Posts: 1724

Nashville, Tennessee, US

Brittney Denea wrote:
Weenie Hut?  Now I want a hot dog!

Also, should I try to submit photos to any magazines?

Good: You are very pretty and have amazing eyes. You also have an amazing figure and seem to rock the pin up look.

I like your pose and expression in this shot:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30644096

Bad: Consistency. Your port is all over the place. Some good shots, some not so good shots. Be selective about the shots you put in your port. Also, when you pose, anything you move toward the photographer will be bigger. Meaning if you move your face closer toward then the rest of your body, the torso is shortened, and the legs are shortened, while making your head larger.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30898820
This shot is an example, and you have better versions of this shot in your port.

With the images you currently have, you could submit to a lesser magazine like a web one. But major magazines would likely not take those shots. When you work with better photograhers then submit, because your look is good.

Feb 10 13 03:15 pm Link

Photographer

Sven Lori

Posts: 278

Brussels, Brussels, Belgium

Give me some hard critics :-)

Feb 11 13 03:07 pm Link

Model

Kate Conner

Posts: 5

Fort Wayne, Indiana, US

salty spitoon me

Feb 12 13 10:57 am Link

Model

Meaghan Monaghan

Posts: 71

Astoria, New York, US

Let me have it between the eyes! Give me that salty critique!  Feel better! smile

Feb 12 13 11:07 am Link

Photographer

Sven Lori

Posts: 278

Brussels, Brussels, Belgium

Give me some critics :-)

Feb 12 13 03:13 pm Link

Model

E e v a

Posts: 1724

Nashville, Tennessee, US

Cameron J Wright wrote:
Feeling a bit salty smile best way to improve imo

Alright, you're very new, I can tell. Salty here though.

One, DO NOT CROP LIMBS if you do not know how to crop off limbs correctly. You keep cropping below the elbow, which is awkward. You also crop out elbows a few times. NO. BAD.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 9#31493061
This shot bothers me. It makes the llama look awful. The lighting makes her look tired and disproportionate.

What you need to improve on is cropping, angles, lighting, and variety. Shoot at a straight angle, not down on your llamas. Shoot some more full body shots or beauty shots. Hopefully this helps a little bit.

Feb 12 13 03:39 pm Link

Photographer

R M A

Posts: 11

Los Angeles, California, US

Weenie Hut! Thank you!

Feb 12 13 03:49 pm Link

Model

E e v a

Posts: 1724

Nashville, Tennessee, US

Acanthus Tattoos wrote:
Weenie Hut Jr.
smile

Yesssshhhh you're the first.

For one, I never think you're 43. You look younger. You have a GREAT body and great tattoos, and I think your best look is your smile. Your teeth are still perfectly white. I love that confidence and abilty to be so free spirited and youthful. Keep it up lady! smile

Feb 12 13 03:50 pm Link

Model

Acanthus Tattoos

Posts: 435

Union, New Jersey, US

Samantha Emme wrote:

Yesssshhhh you're the first.

For one, I never think you're 43. You look younger. You have a GREAT body and great tattoos, and I think your best look is your smile. Your teeth are still perfectly white. I love that confidence and abilty to be so free spirited and youthful. Keep it up lady! smile

thank you!!

Feb 16 13 08:20 pm Link

Model

E e v a

Posts: 1724

Nashville, Tennessee, US

Acanthus Tattoos wrote:


thank you!!

Thank you for bumping this lol.

To the rest I will keep coming back to finish these up every now and then. It's a slow process and sometimes I will be taking breaks to get my brain working again. Thank you for your patience.

Feb 16 13 09:25 pm Link

Photographer

Norman Ding

Posts: 68

New York, New York, US

Go salty!

Feb 17 13 03:11 pm Link

Model

Shelly Foster

Posts: 53

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada

I'll have the Weenie hut critique please smile

Feb 18 13 08:12 am Link

Model

Mary Zdo

Posts: 176

San Ramon, California, US

Man, even though my portfolio is basically nonexistent right now I'm really tempted to post in this awesome thread anyway. So here goes nothing, Weenie Hut please? Hopefully I won't have to drag myself to Weenie Hut General after from the pain.

Feb 18 13 02:52 pm Link

Photographer

L Raye

Posts: 5045

Petaluma, California, US

Salty Spitoon, please!

Feb 18 13 03:00 pm Link

Photographer

V I S T A S

Posts: 58

Albuquerque, New Mexico, US

Give it your best shot!

Feb 19 13 10:14 am Link

Model

Sky Donohue

Posts: 265

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

I pick the salty spoon, please!

Feb 19 13 01:39 pm Link