Project4145 wrote:
Absolutely.  Good luck narrowing it down.

Hey Lee
I like your stuff, champ !
one suggestion i have, when you shoot on location make sure you narrow the composition so the eyes doesnt wander and stays on the subject.

bonus hit
better post work can also help you isolate
R/

John Allan wrote:
Ok, open for insight. Thanks.

if you images are from tests then they are great. I would do a little more post to polish if they are final images to models/agencies or clients.

Great work btw !
R/

robertXC wrote:

if you images are from tests then they are great. I would do a little more post to polish if they are final images to models/agencies or clients.

Great work btw !
R/

Thanks!
Yes, they're from tests. Suggestions on where post can improve. BTW, some of my images further down in my MM port are from before I was using micro d&b to retouch.
Retouching is still a learning process for me. I miss the days when all I had to do is deliver chromes back to the agency for tests. No post.

ammdigital wrote:
I'm sure that there are at least 75 things that I need to improve, but I'd like to hear your thought on the most important one . . .

ummm, i only counted 68 ... - LOL

quick hit one thing ... better background selection. in some cases the background ruins the image for me

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Erlinda wrote:
Skipped me? I'm that awesome I don't need improvement?

ooops thought you were commiserating with me

and hells yeah, you are THAT awesome ... I luv your port very moody and fashion oriented.
Hoping to tour UK next year, there is some amazing talent there ...

Keep up the inspirational work -- send ya an FR

Ciao
r/x

BlueMoonPics wrote:
I'm editing and retouching. Fun everywhere.

hey bluemoon
very little wrong, if any with your images, what i think lets you down is posing. This maybe a consequence of your model direction or working with inexperienced models. Find the poses a little bland.

hope it helps -- hey i am gonna be in your neck of the woods next month
R/

BIP wrote:
Yes please mr coppa
I'd love your advice on the next thing for me to improve
Am also available to assist you any time you like
Ben
www.benpyke.com

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Hello Mr BIP
I must say, i like your new stuff better. I would try to get a bit more contrast in the b/w blacks are good, but the white are a little washed. Of course, that could be your style. Do you D & B? could use a little more.

And thank you for the offer, i am gonna be in sydney for a fitness gig tomorrow, but already engaged with assist. Will keep it in mind tho'

Ciao
R/

[url=http://florida.arrests.org/Arrests/Tyler_Waitt_2207044 wrote:
Tyler[/url] Craze] Ahhh, fuggit. I'm new here...I'll take a hit.

So Tyler, first thing right up, I read your profile and you say your a fashion Tog, but not much of any fashion-wise in your portfolio. Mainly glam ...

You need to work with your lighting to bring in some drama in your images. Your images are somewhat flat for my taste. technically good, but lack whooophhh ! , yes?

best, champ !
R/

LeighN wrote:
Yes! I'd love to hear!

Hi leigh
two thing you need to concentrate on ... see already giving you 200%

1. you need to learn how to pose, especially if you want to do fashion/editorial work.
2. you need to work on your facial expression. You only have 2 in your whole port.

hope that helps
R/x

Caustic Disco wrote:
top 3 images in my port, please? thanks

Hey caustic
images 1 and 3 are ok. 3 should have been b/w with that treatment, its not as effective in color IMO. Image 2 is a miss, its soft ... no actually its out of focus, i'd ditch that

also i know you didnt ask ... but you gotta trim your port, too long ... keep it to just the wow images

Ciao
R/x

Inertia Creeps wrote:
How can I improve my modeling?
Enlighten me.


Inertia

SO inertia
You're a hard way. By your accounts you are getting close to be featured in galleries, thats great and it seems to be your goal. You have a great aloof look, great face and some great poses. But others are cliche ... you are doing everything right

R/x

robertXC wrote:

hey bluemoon
very little wrong, if any with your images, what i think lets you down is posing. This maybe a consequence of your model direction or working with inexperienced models. Find the poses a little bland.

hope it helps -- hey i am gonna be in your neck of the woods next month
R/

Thank you very much for your critique and advice.
Maybe we can meet up once you are here in NYC.

robertXC wrote:
So Tyler, first thing right up, I read your profile and you say your a fashion Tog, but not much of any fashion-wise in your portfolio. Mainly glam ...

You need to work with your lighting to bring in some drama in your images. Your images are somewhat flat for my taste. technically good, but lack whooophhh ! , yes?

best, champ !
R/

I appreciate it! I've been working a lot of glam recently, and concentrating on my technique. I want to have the tech down before I let the artsy out.

robertXC wrote:

Hey caustic
images 1 and 3 are ok. 3 should have been b/w with that treatment, its not as effective in color IMO. Image 2 is a miss, its soft ... no actually its out of focus, i'd ditch that

also i know you didnt ask ... but you gotta trim your port, too long ... keep it to just the wow images

Ciao
R/x

thank you!! please let me know if there's any in particular that i should cut, i have a hard time trimming it down

Maruschke wrote:
I would love to know

great figure. 

and you have great emotion in most shots. 

try and find the best angles for photographers to capture you.
just because you are 5'4'', doesn't mean you have to look that
way in your pictures.

just my needless advice.