Model

Melinda B

Posts: 31

Detroit, Michigan, US

Please critique my newest photos.

Feb 02 17 05:26 pm Link

Photographer

A. K. Southard

Posts: 167

Detroit, Michigan, US

They aren't as good as some of your older photos.  There are several issues regarding the photography. Your poses are a bit static.  For example, the latest one, you could have created some angles with your legs rather than have them parallel.

Feb 08 17 04:33 am Link

Photographer

David Kirk

Posts: 4852

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

Is this one of them?  If so, drop it.  It's a blown out mess.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/170124/18/588813a25718a_m.jpg

Feb 10 17 08:47 am Link

Photographer

A. K. Southard

Posts: 167

Detroit, Michigan, US

David Kirk wrote:
Is this one of them?  If so, drop it.  It's a blown out mess.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/170124/18/588813a25718a_m.jpg

Completely agree.  The other one has boring light and no contrast.  I didn't comment on those qualities earlier because that's the photographer's fault.

Feb 11 17 06:25 am Link