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Photographer

j Scott imagery

Posts: 53

Great Falls, Montana, US

Added a few new shots, kept some older ones. Please critique my port as a whole or individual images. Thank you for your help.

May 07 17 10:23 am Link

Photographer

Krpphoto

Posts: 197

Cape Coral, Florida, US

The one of her on water. Rotate yourself ( the photographer) counter clockwise for an angled view of models body. Her near elbow raised and pushed back in so its a bit closer to other elbow to allow some ( peekaboo doughnut hole type) space between body and arm( for trimmer look) and also so elbow is not dominating the image). Elbows should  not be the closest thing to the lens of the camera . Her head could be rotated a bit more counter clockwise - just enough that she has to turn her  eyes toward lens- but not to the point where the blue of the eyes is touching the edge of the eye sockets.

May 07 17 08:42 pm Link

Photographer

j Scott imagery

Posts: 53

Great Falls, Montana, US

mrbob wrote:
The one of her on water. Rotate yourself ( the photographer) counter clockwise for an angled view of models body. Her near elbow raised and pushed back in so its a bit closer to other elbow to allow some ( peekaboo doughnut hole type) space between body and arm( for trimmer look) and also so elbow is not dominating the image). Elbows should  not be the closest thing to the lens of the camera . Her head could be rotated a bit more counter clockwise - just enough that she has to turn her  eyes toward lens- but not to the point where the blue of the eyes is touching the edge of the eye sockets.

Thanks, I will definitely make some adjustments

May 08 17 09:58 am Link