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Model

Ellie Majesty

Posts: 10

Sarasota, Florida, US

Hello,

I am a full time model based out of south florida. Every once and a while I like to drop into this forum and get some feedback.

I just updated my portfolio.

My goal with my portfolio is always as follows:

1. Post only high quality photos.

2. Show a range of genres, outfits, hair styles, makeup, and poses.

3. Only post one or two photos from any given set

4. Organize the photos in such a way that the portfolio doesn't seem repetitive (not place too many similar photos in a row... ex. too many vertical, horizontal, similar poses, similar outfits, ect.

Apr 16 18 03:28 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Over all as a model you have a great look, you work your posing well.

My top photo picks from your portfolio

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/180218/18/5a8a3a685df3e_m.jpg
Great eyes wish house was not there

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/171109/06/5a046a986b4bf_m.jpg
Simply well executed on your part

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160924/17/57e72070087cf_m.jpg
Again nice work on your part

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160914/22/57da32bee66e2_m.jpg
Strong pose on your part

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/171109/06/5a046aa27b710_m.jpg


I wish you well

Apr 24 18 05:10 pm Link

Photographer

Wandering Eyebubble

Posts: 323

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Your port is really nice, it seems to me you're checking all the right boxes as it is. My only suggestion is to perhaps cut down on the number of images to about a third of what you have. One criteria to do so would be to cull the lowest-resolution pictures (small, overly compressed).

Apr 25 18 11:58 am Link

Makeup Artist

LotteConcepts

Posts: 41

s-Hertogenbosch, Noord-Brabant, Netherlands

more natural pictures so clients can really see what you look like.

too many pictures in your portfolio I would cut some

A lot of pictures where you are touching/holding your head, would cut some of those.

Apr 30 18 06:30 am Link

Photographer

Garry k

Posts: 30128

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

I think you are in need of some good beuaty headshots .....

and more deversilty with the hairstyling ( you have great hair )

and I agreee with the above poster

less shots in your portfolio ( cut out the lesser or redundant shots )

Apr 30 18 07:15 pm Link