Forums > Critique > I will list your best and will tell you why.

Model

Evaldas Burba

Posts: 408

Bloomington, Illinois, US

Do me please smile

Jun 25 11 08:19 pm Link

Photographer

ikonas Boston

Posts: 736

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Hello David,
Please take a stab at my port. Many thanks!
Ikonas

Jun 25 11 08:58 pm Link

Photographer

Unspoken words

Posts: 100

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

If yo see one you like, please do tell me my best and why. Thanks!!!!

Jun 25 11 09:04 pm Link

Photographer

Sylvain Denis

Posts: 75

Fort Lauderdale, Florida, US

Jun 25 11 09:10 pm Link

Photographer

Marcus Turner Photo

Posts: 201

Chicago, Illinois, US

What one do you think is my best?

Jun 25 11 10:03 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Danielle Sheridan wrote:
I would love to get your feedback! smile Also, I think its great how you're helping others! Thank you!

wow, great features
I would prefer this as avatar https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110112/21/4d2e8c514a709_m.jpg
your beautiful features and figure is obvious in this https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110610/22/4df2fd1f5f307_m.jpg and this very erotic image https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 8#23446598
gorgeous expression https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101028/23/4cca64f6d668e_m.jpg
your poses and smiles are awesome and you pose very well. Although you are 5' 3" you look a lot tall in your photos because you are slim.
you are very sexy and seductive and you look as if you have more then one trick up your sleeve.
keep it up. gorgeous port and camera loves you.
wink

Jun 26 11 01:06 pm Link

Photographer

Little Ones Photography

Posts: 25

Dayton, Ohio, US

New to the scene so I would be interested in hearing what you think is my best and what not! Thanks

Jun 26 11 01:29 pm Link

Digital Artist

KayC Oliver Photography

Posts: 598

Omaha, Nebraska, US

I'd like to hear your thoughts when you have the time.

Jun 26 11 01:32 pm Link

Photographer

Lighted Images

Posts: 147

Seattle, Washington, US

Please check out my port.  Thanks

Jun 26 11 01:42 pm Link

Model

maria_rose

Posts: 43

Cleveland, Ohio, US

Meee!

Jun 26 11 02:59 pm Link

Model

Amani Amour

Posts: 4

Dallas, Texas, US

Please me!!!!!

Jun 26 11 03:15 pm Link

Model

Ardella

Posts: 20

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

So impressed with what you're doing for the community here, massive props for helping so many people!

I'm only just starting out, and my portfolio is tiny. But I'd love to take on any pointers you may have for me.

Jun 27 11 03:08 am Link

Photographer

Nico Simon Princely

Posts: 1972

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

Why not, let see what your top pick is out of my port. I'd prefer you select from my new 2011 work.

Jun 27 11 03:37 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Nataly G wrote:
New to MM, would really appreciate few comments on my portfolio work, especially need to decide which images submit to the agency.
Regards,
Nataly

Hello Nataly,
you have very well balanced port
with many eye catchers like this https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110621/02/4e00679ce7def_m.jpghttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110614/09/4df792096a239_m.jpg  listed
great fashion looks like this https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110606/15/4ded58c8e1530_m.jpg https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110505/02/4dc26d4f2acdb_m.jpg

as well as classic looks https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110526/06/4dde5420c5caf_m.jpg

and character shots https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110505/02/4dc26dea2a0a6_m.jpg sexy eye glasses, nice story teller.
I love your killer heels on this
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110505/03/4dc277d4e03c1_m.jpg
you picked great photographers and it shows

gorgeous figure https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110505/08/4dc2bf88bfe27_m.jpg
lose this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 2#23623262 you look too goofy LOL
photo quality is a bit meh below 2
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 7#23212727
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 3#23212713

You look great in classic nylons as well https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110614/11/4df7ac8616aac_m.jpg listed but too much brushing and loses the glitz on your welts, listed, this one is also nice https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110614/11/4df7adb8e22d7_m.jpgbut too tightly cropped.
this one failed big time! https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110614/11/4df7ae7d27b7f_m.jpg it could have been shot into a pinup, you posed well but the light and contrast is meh, your right side is undistinguishable from the same pink background.

keep it up, you are just drop dead gorgeous! and have an amazing look wink

Jun 27 11 07:20 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Select Models wrote:
Cool... borat

Gary you double dipped big_smile
earlier review
https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st15230318
but added a lot since so I am taking the time to go over a bit more on your excellent work.
you have a garden variety of genres in your port and you seem to  deliver  consistent quality.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110303/18/4d7053cfa5070_m.jpg love the perspective distortion
but here https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090601/15/4a24511d283dd_m.jpg you made her ankles look fat. This type of thick socks are a big no no for this type of look. You could still pull it off if she had her left feet moved a bit forward to reveal only the rear half of heels on her right feet. This angle is not giving the needed impact of those pumps.
your angles and color saturation in picture is excellent https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110406/10/4d9c9ccd81f63_m.jpg definite eye catcher.
you are probably like me who shot a lot crawling on the floor wink

my props goes to all who crafted this https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110625/20/4e06a25cda8a1_m.jpg listed
you know how to make a woman look good https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110303/22/4d7086e38892a_m.jpg
great perspectives without deforming body and heads https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110303/12/4d6ff750ef3ab_m.jpg
your work is not the run of the mill,
keep shooting you are excellent.

Jun 27 11 09:13 am Link

Photographer

Photos by McQ

Posts: 25

HAYDENVILLE, Massachusetts, US

If you have the opportunity, feedback would be welcomed.
Thanks,
McQ

Jun 29 11 06:49 pm Link

Model

Hannah Painter

Posts: 105

Wilmington, North Carolina, US

Would love to hear your opinion!

Jun 29 11 06:51 pm Link

Model

Tsalagi

Posts: 245

Miami, Florida, US

Do me please,thanks smile

Cat

Jun 29 11 07:28 pm Link

Photographer

Fotografica Gregor

Posts: 4126

Alexandria, Virginia, US

You have a very interesting and varied body of work - I would appreciate your thoughts on my portfolio.  Cheers.

Jun 29 11 07:31 pm Link

Model

Tsalagi

Posts: 245

Miami, Florida, US

Anybody that wants to critique the little bit of modeling I have done is welcome to me n my friend are just learning together as we go he's my photographer so I appreciate any advice or tips but just try to be nice I'm just trying to have fun thanks

Cat  smile

Jun 29 11 07:39 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

GentleGrace Photography wrote:
Yes please

this is a eye catcher https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110310/08/4d78fe353f03d_m.jpg but the crop is too tight
nice smile you caught there https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110607/15/4deea23a20a93_m.jpg
great job capturing actionhttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110412/08/4da475478f715_m.jpg
I saw some wonderful work in your port but nothing really excites me.
I have seen better portraiture both in lighting and edits.
Your outdoor commercial style work is more attractive.

Jun 29 11 08:59 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Farrah Beers wrote:
let me know too, please smile

Farrah you are a wonderful lady and pose quite nice.
You have too many of the same look in your port like this
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110508/01/4dc650526c906_m.jpg blue shirt big_smile
this is my fav https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110505/08/4dc2c31b95503_m.jpg
you need to expand and update your port and get rid of redundant looks
you will be perfect for  pinups
keep shooting and cherry pick photographers wink

Jun 29 11 09:08 pm Link

Photographer

Photografik Endeavors

Posts: 9

Mississauga, Ontario, Canada

Interested in your thoughts.

Jun 29 11 09:16 pm Link

Model

Porcelain Dollface

Posts: 230

Gdańsk, Pomorskie, Poland

me?

Jun 30 11 04:58 am Link

Photographer

LookattheBirdie

Posts: 15

Austin, Texas, US

OK, Let at it, be brutally honest

Jun 30 11 05:10 am Link

Photographer

Jim S

Posts: 1

Lancaster, Pennsylvania, US

LET ME HAVE IT!!

Jun 30 11 05:12 am Link

Photographer

JerodKeller Photography

Posts: 13

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

What would you consider my best?

Jun 30 11 05:16 am Link

Model

Kdie Whitney

Posts: 34

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

Id like to know what you think of mine smile

Jun 30 11 06:15 am Link

Model

Kdie Whitney

Posts: 34

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

Id like to know what you think of mine smile

Jun 30 11 06:17 am Link

Photographer

Starsquid

Posts: 356

s-Gravenhage, Zuid-Holland, Netherlands

Interesting to know which one, me please smile

Jun 30 11 07:58 am Link

Photographer

K Nichols Photography

Posts: 45

Newport News, Virginia, US

I'm fairly new here and would appreciate your time and feedback!

Jun 30 11 08:24 am Link

Model

Chelsea Kithcart

Posts: 127

Durham, North Carolina, US

Hi ! :-)    I'd Love to hear what you have to say about my port .

Jun 30 11 01:24 pm Link

Model

Hannah Painter

Posts: 105

Wilmington, North Carolina, US

Jun 30 11 09:38 pm Link

Model

Hannah Painter

Posts: 105

Wilmington, North Carolina, US

Hannah Painter wrote:
Would love to hear your opinion!

I'm back! I have posted some professional pictures now and would love to know what you think!

Jun 30 11 09:39 pm Link

Photographer

Therese J

Posts: 18

Göteborg, Västra Götaland, Sweden

Please do me! big_smile

Jul 01 11 11:28 am Link

Photographer

Shane Klein

Posts: 36

Dallas, Texas, US

Sure! Let me know what you think when you get a chance :-)

Jul 01 11 01:07 pm Link

Model

Lucky_Duck

Posts: 42

Elmsdale, Prince Edward Island, Canada

I would like to know what you think! I'm also just highly impressed that you take the time to give your opinion so freely!

Jul 01 11 06:12 pm Link

Photographer

Glory Photo

Posts: 76

Sacramento, California, US

Yes, please!

Jul 01 11 06:18 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Phoenix Photographics wrote:
I would LOVE a critique by you! Please!

you do well in outdoor shots
I don't like the light in below over exposed shots
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 1#23562091
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 4#23562134
the flash is direct and out of whack sad and there is no contrast in the picture.
Just the fact that her shirt color is same as the bed sheets make this really worst and boring especially in concept. The photo loses details and makes it really not interesting to look at even if the model gave you terrific poses.

love the location and color details in thishttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090730/19/4a72585c28879_m.jpg
this was an eye catcher in the thumb https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/13111188 but poor dynamic range when opened.
great catch here https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090805/20/4a7a51e58fe02_m.jpg
you have couple of nice outdoor portraits but nothing really earth shattering in terms of color balance contrast and saturation. In sum no eye candy in your work.
this https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090801/22/4a7520b627b45_m.jpg would have been great if the dynamic range was good but I am unable to distinguish waves and since I don't see any spark in the eyes looks like you did not use any flash to give you some dynamic range which would boost this photo and make it more attractive.

this is your best https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090510/08/4a06ed76ebc06_m.jpg with some even flash use.
nothing really great to list in your port.

Jul 06 11 03:47 am Link

Photographer

jesse paulk

Posts: 3712

Phoenix, Arizona, US

well now im feeling left out.....

Jul 06 11 05:15 am Link