i have added some pictures to my album.  i reduced image size, cause i didn't like seeing my pictures used without my permission, but please critique what you see, and let me know if you would like to see a larger size.

technical comments would be more appreciated.


thanks.

I would like to see the images larger - I have poor eyesight lol
The last image - the girl with her arms folded was far to bright for my liking and I am not keen about he crop but the rest are great.  I left a complimnetary comment regarding one of them - the image with the amazing eyes.

i made the images larger.

thank you for your comments.

Not trying to be negative but your avatar interested me ( it is a good shot ) so I went into your portfolio........... thats where it stopped many of the photos look like snapshots...........Walt

Sorry but I've gotta agree with Walt.  For example, in #3, you've got cars in the background.  In #4, your subject blends into the background and her eyes are closed.  In #7, the subject is off center but what makes this bad is that there's a picture on the wall and something distracting in the corner.

Paul

you should stay in the style of your avatar. dump the rest.

Well, for one thing, dark hair against a dark background, as in:
is a no-no.

Drop the shot, & don't do it again.