Paul Ferrara wrote:
Your outdoor shots are the best.  The blue background is way too vivid.  And why does every black woman feel she needs a bootie shot?  Get rid of that one.

Paul

I agree with Paul.

And the Yummy shot is very pornish imho, all you need to do is cough and it's complete.

Tonya E wrote:
I am seeking tfp's with other photographers, but not for the reason of finding a better photographer, but rather to have a variety of pics from different photographers.

Forget about variety. 
Variety is useless if it lacks quality.
You don't have to stop working with your past photographers.  Work with them and grow with them.  But forget about variety, until you have achieved a good amount of quality first.
Certainly, you may be able to kill two birds with one stone.  Try to kill the "quality bird" first though.
Good luck.