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Model

_Tabitha_Rose_

Posts: 91

Chicago, Illinois, US

Hey guys.. i need some feedback on my pics.. Leave a comment or two- i love to hear opinions from others in the industry.. Ill comment back..i promise!

Thank you

Tabitha

Sep 10 05 02:17 am Link

Photographer

Columbus Photo

Posts: 2318

Columbus, Georgia, US

You've got a good start.  Find another photographers and keep shooting.

And BTW, you need to put your photographers link with every image.  Don't get lazy.

Paul

Sep 10 05 02:35 am Link

Photographer

Rya Nell

Posts: 539

New Orleans, Louisiana, US

Yep.  What Paul said.  Honestly, you've got too many images from the same shoot.  Repetitive = Boring.  Try finding new photogs.  All the photos seem to have the same style and same lighting.  Same = Repetitive = Boring. All the photos seem to have the same style and same lighting.  Same = Repetitive = Boring.All the photos seem to have the same style and same lighting.  Same = Repetitive = Boring. All the photos seem to have the same style and same lighting.  Same = Repetitive = Boring.

You do have a nice look, by the way.  I like the russian/italian features, and your tan skin tone is very pleasing to the eye.

You're off to a good start.  Not sure what your ultimate goal is, but a good aim for you now would be to keep shooting (with different but qualified photogs), build up your port, and ruthlessly edit your port.

Sep 10 05 04:21 am Link

Photographer

Fireflyfotography

Posts: 321

Las Colinas, Panamá, Panama

White points are way off tell that to your photo guy so he can redo them as far as poses go that not bad at all
If you shoot on a white seamless then make it white not pink (photoguys) lol

Sep 11 05 05:10 pm Link

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LongWindFPV Visuals

Posts: 7052

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

Tabitha, for a 16-year-old, you look amazingly and physically mature in your Avatar. But, your face here https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=4322881040fd9 betrays you. You cute kid you.

This one would've been hot https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=430e84a701846, but then you're looking up, which makes the image look dorky. Either look somewhere past the camera, or look at your feet, or tilt your head back a little, close your eyes and relax...anything, but look up. *grin*

Like this one here! https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=431675b7918ee
See? Now, THAT'S hot. ...eh, except for the part at the bottom of the pic. The hell is that? Edge of the seamless? Tacky man. Tacky.

This shot is awesome: https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=42b9abd9a9369

Sep 11 05 05:19 pm Link