I have just posted some new topless photos of the very beautiful Jasmine Grey, Check them out and let me know what you think.

well the exposure is good and composition is a personal thing..
but it looks like the images exist, because you wanted topless pics so you shot them...

my suggestion is have a vision first, in your mind of the images you want..

then construct or find the environmet to frame your model

then find the model that completes your vision.

great images start out in the photographers mind..not with some naked chick in a bed room...i hope you take this in the spirit it was intended...

Doug's advice is right on the money. And he has the experience to back these words up.

I agree with Doug.  None of your images show any modeling (shadows).  You don't light model pictures like you do a wedding.  Time to hit the books.

Paul

Yes, to be honest- your technique is lacking.  And the fact that you've got a buxom naked girl in them seems to emphasize the point.  You'd benefit from practice and studying.  Read about what makes good lighting, and start collecting a list of favorite (published) photographers.

Doug makes some really good points.   We have to agree with him.  Just remember, lighting makes all the difference in the world.  Also, a suggestion, try bringing the model off of the background more.  You want it to be more about the model, less about the wall behind her.

Flat even light it says nice snap shot  but I think you wanted it to say ummm sexy pic