Thanks for your help beforehand

Most are fine but the beach one  thats a female pose not a male pose

i commented on one of your photos
i like them all except i have to agree with dragonfly image that the one of you in the water looks a little too feminine

Ehh....
Your avatar "simplicity" is your best shot. 
The "At the Beach" is the worst.  Jamie hit the nail on the head, plus the look on your face is a bit awkward. 
The "creation" shot is OK.
The "laying on the ground" shot is mediocre.

My advice: Keep working/practicing with different photographers.