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Model

Suzanne Pitofsky

Posts: 31

Orlando, Florida, US

Hi every1, I am new in the modeling world.. I really would appreciate if anyone/everyone could help me out a lil bit?? Please give me advise as to what i should do, critiques, any job openings u kno of.. really anything at all..
u can contact me on myspace @ www.myspace.com/devilishangel112983   i have some more pics there...
or my MM # is 38216

Sep 10 05 10:10 pm Link

Model

Suzanne Pitofsky

Posts: 31

Orlando, Florida, US

1) Outstanding!
2) Well done
3) Terrific
4) Hm, pretty good
...4.5) it's a'ight
...4.6) it's kinda a'ight
...4.7) hm, it's kinda a'ight
...4.8) um, it's kinda kinda a'ight
...4.9) eh, I see somethin', but it's hard to see...definitely needs work
5) Um, not so good
...5.5) not good at all
...5.6) dood, that's sucky
...5.7) man, that's just plain sucky
...5.8) the hell did you feed your camera with? tragic-balanced film!?
6) HUH!?
...6.5) WTF is crap like that doing on here!?
...6.6) the Police will be after your ass
...6.7) the FBI is at your front door man. ya better book while you can!
7) You're going to hell for that
 

Please Critique me....

Sep 10 05 10:45 pm Link

Photographer

Columbus Photo

Posts: 2318

Columbus, Georgia, US

You look pretty good but the photographers you've worked with so far ain't so hot.  Find better photographers.

Paul

Sep 10 05 10:48 pm Link

Model

Suzanne Pitofsky

Posts: 31

Orlando, Florida, US

i am trying to find some any recommendations??

Sep 10 05 10:59 pm Link

Photographer

Columbus Photo

Posts: 2318

Columbus, Georgia, US

There are a bunch of FL guys here.  Click on the browse tab and find a few who's work you like and send them a message.  You shouldn't have any trouble getting shoots.

Paul

Sep 11 05 04:22 am Link

Model

Suzanne Pitofsky

Posts: 31

Orlando, Florida, US

thanx 4 ur help

Sep 11 05 04:31 am Link

Photographer

Fireflyfotography

Posts: 321

Las Colinas, Panamá, Panama

What are you looking for as a model where do you see yourself inn
Fashion Glamour Swimsuit girl,, Biker chic magazines
I think you need to restart the port  with the basics  head shots 3/4 shots
action shoots casual  I am just seeing that you like to show your body off like your ass and legs nothing wrong with this at all but looks "suggestive"  maybe I am off if so no biggy    I think you like the Biker Chic Swimsuit girl thing focus on that and get some good sample to show on the portfolio then photoguys that are looking for that will see that in your pictures and say " hey I need this and its for Easy Rider and it pays this much""

Sep 11 05 03:35 pm Link

Photographer

LongWindFPV Visuals

Posts: 7052

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

DeViLiShAnGeL wrote:
1) Outstanding!
2) Well done
3) Terrific
4) Hm, pretty good
...4.5) it's a'ight
...4.6) it's kinda a'ight
...4.7) hm, it's kinda a'ight
...4.8) um, it's kinda kinda a'ight
...4.9) eh, I see somethin', but it's hard to see...definitely needs work
5) Um, not so good
...5.5) not good at all
...5.6) dood, that's sucky
...5.7) man, that's just plain sucky
...5.8) the hell did you feed your camera with? tragic-balanced film!?
6) HUH!?
...6.5) WTF is crap like that doing on here!?
...6.6) the Police will be after your ass
...6.7) the FBI is at your front door man. ya better book while you can!
7) You're going to hell for that
 
Please Critique me....

hrm...that rating system looks familiar wink ...i'm flattered chick, but you're a no. 7 for not giving the author credit.

Anyhoo, I took a look at your port...

This one gets a #3 (because I like cute tasty butt shots)
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=4323426c18d65
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=432342528cae9

These get a #4
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=43234153bb112
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=432341368cac3

This one gets a 4.5
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=4323463359674

The rest of the images gets a no. 5. below average quality. These images had to be taken with camera that falls in no. 5.8 category. I've seen disposables and instamatics take better quality than that!

Your modeling is 4.8, but only because you probably need to work more with serious photographers who have experience directing peoples' model poses, attitudes, etc.

Keep up the modeling and the search for good photographers.

p.s...

For this shot
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=432341368cac3

I like the lighting and the set. It's actually outstanding and your modeling too, but the soft texture doesn't do it for me.

Overall, your looks is a no. 3 wink  ...I'd work with ya...

Sep 11 05 03:53 pm Link

Photographer

Rya Nell

Posts: 539

New Orleans, Louisiana, US

I'd look for new photogs if I were you.  And keep practicing.

Sep 11 05 06:15 pm Link