I've had this page up a while now and I'm currently re-vamping my port.  Can someone please tell me whats good and bad about my look, pics, etc.......

"whats good and bad about my look, pics, etc"

I am not going to comment on yur look because the pictures you have do not flatter you at all.  Therefore you are not presenting your look with these images.  Find a photographer who IS taking gret images of other simlar models and follow this photographers direction.  You just may come out of the shoot with a look that works for you, and then you will have a start and hopefully a base to buidl on.  Choose your wardrobe carefully before each shot and do nto show up with the limited selection you have in these shots or you will limit the photoraphers abilities to help you..