Forums > Critique > Pics from this weekend, comment / critique welcome

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BlindMike

Posts: 9594

San Francisco, California, US

Sep 18 05 08:31 pm Link

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Columbus Photo

Posts: 2318

Columbus, Georgia, US

They're very good.  Good job!  But her skin need some touch up.  Just saw that.

Paul

Sep 18 05 09:01 pm Link

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ProShotPhoto

Posts: 486

Bellingham, Massachusetts, US

I like them. 

BUT I want to see into the eyes of the model and connect with her and have her bring me into the image.

It maybe just me but if she is looking away i want to look at what she is looking at.  That means she directs me to look away form the image.

So my favorites are the last two.  The others i feel are good shots but suit a different purpose than to promoting the model.  She is an interesting and very attractive subject and I think you were both rewarded and each happy with the results of this shot.

Sep 19 05 12:11 am Link

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Wayne Cutler

Posts: 640

Los Angeles, California, US

Nice shots.  The plants are giving her skin a green tint in a couple of the pictures.  I would try to take that out with Color Correction or Hue/Saturation.

Sep 19 05 04:03 am Link