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Jovanie

Posts: 2

Los Angeles, California, US

Comments would really help me out i'm always open for opinions. you know beauty is in the eye of the beholder. So i must ask what do you think of my modeling.

Sep 23 05 08:42 am Link

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LongWindFPV Visuals

Posts: 7052

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

I'd say you're giving Eric Muss-Barnes some competition there.

These are the ones you should keep on your port:
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=4322b32756f65
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=4322b29e23b12
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=4322b26f6f605
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=4322b224bd826
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=4304c97a26cd7
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=4301486452bc8
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=4301459bad126

The rest are weak, don't do a thing for your looks and clutter up your port.

For variety, get a:

- couple of shots of you somewhere out in the big city
- couple of shots of you with a great big Crest toothpaste smile
- couple of Hanes t-shirt and underwear shot in a studio
- sports/action shot...shoot some hoops. Somethin.

The "look at me I'm Rico Suave's cousin" type of shots gets a little played out, but balances out if you got the other shots I suggested.

Know what? Be different. Get a shot of you all decked out and helping a little old lady cross the street. Go see W. Herb Clarke (Xtreme Artists) in Florida and mention this idea to him.

Sep 24 05 04:25 pm Link

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ProShotPhoto

Posts: 486

Bellingham, Massachusetts, US

Joe K. Perez wrote:
I'd say you're giving Eric Muss-Barnes some competition there.

These are the ones you should keep on your port:
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=4322b32756f65
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=4322b29e23b12
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=4322b26f6f605
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=4322b224bd826
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=4304c97a26cd7
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=4301486452bc8
https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=4301459bad126

The rest are weak, don't do a thing for your looks and clutter up your port.

For variety, get a:

- couple of shots of you somewhere out in the big city
- couple of shots of you with a great big Crest toothpaste smile
- couple of Hanes t-shirt and underwear shot in a studio
- sports/action shot...shoot some hoops. Somethin.

The "look at me I'm Rico Suave's cousin" type of shots gets a little played out, but balances out if you got the other shots I suggested.

Know what? Be different. Get a shot of you all decked out and helping a little old lady cross the street. Go see W. Herb Clarke (Xtreme Artists) in Florida and mention this idea to him.

That is good advice.

Sep 24 05 05:17 pm Link