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Photographer

Arice

Posts: 29

Elkridge, Maryland, US

Looking for comments on my new series, Figure in White. All comments welcome. I take criticism well.

Oct 21 05 03:41 pm Link

Model

~*Isabel Aurora*~

Posts: 5778

Boca del Mar, Florida, US

gets two thumbs up from me smile don't know how much that helps, though

Oct 21 05 05:14 pm Link

Photographer

RobHowardStudios

Posts: 555

Mount Pleasant, Michigan, US

I am in awe!

I would not know HOW to critique it.

WOW.

Some of it is just plain stunning.

NICE WORK!

Oct 21 05 05:15 pm Link

Photographer

Brian Diaz

Posts: 65617

Danbury, Connecticut, US

Seriously, these are fantastic.  When I saw them, my first question was When does the book come out?

Oct 21 05 05:17 pm Link

Photographer

DaG

Posts: 2784

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Awesome work you've got there. I'm not qualified to critique this type of photography either but I will give two minor suggestions:

1) On the first shot there is something weird about the white arm on the right. I can't put my finger on what it is. It might be the position or it might be the lack of contrast between the arm and the background. Either way it seems disconnected from the rest of the shot. I have no suggestions on what could have been done differently. Perhaps painting part of the design on that arm would have helped.

2) On the second image just crop out the unpainted skin from the top! It's distracting.

See, I told you they were minor! Great stuff throughout your entire port! You might enjoy viewing this photographer's work: http://www.fleshandcolor.com

Hope this helps

Danny
GFP

Oct 21 05 09:44 pm Link

Artist/Painter

bijan studio

Posts: 1854

TARZANA, California, US

WOW, great work.

Oct 22 05 02:13 am Link

Model

l_chatman

Posts: 128

New York, New York, US

That was amazing...wish I could say more, but this isn't my area of expertise AT ALL.  I just know that I like it. :-)

Oct 22 05 02:11 pm Link

Photographer

JM Dean

Posts: 8931

Cary, North Carolina, US

Some awesome stuff! Maybe crop Diana 1 so her unpainted chin does not show?

Oct 22 05 02:19 pm Link

Photographer

Arice

Posts: 29

Elkridge, Maryland, US

Thank you for all the responses.

Oct 25 05 08:34 am Link