Looking for comments on my new series, Figure in White. All comments welcome. I take criticism well. Oct 21 05 03:41 pm Link gets two thumbs up from me don't know how much that helps, though Oct 21 05 05:14 pm Link I am in awe! I would not know HOW to critique it. WOW. Some of it is just plain stunning. NICE WORK! Oct 21 05 05:15 pm Link Seriously, these are fantastic. When I saw them, my first question was When does the book come out? Oct 21 05 05:17 pm Link Awesome work you've got there. I'm not qualified to critique this type of photography either but I will give two minor suggestions: 1) On the first shot there is something weird about the white arm on the right. I can't put my finger on what it is. It might be the position or it might be the lack of contrast between the arm and the background. Either way it seems disconnected from the rest of the shot. I have no suggestions on what could have been done differently. Perhaps painting part of the design on that arm would have helped. 2) On the second image just crop out the unpainted skin from the top! It's distracting. See, I told you they were minor! Great stuff throughout your entire port! You might enjoy viewing this photographer's work: http://www.fleshandcolor.com Hope this helps Danny GFP Oct 21 05 09:44 pm Link WOW, great work. Oct 22 05 02:13 am Link That was amazing...wish I could say more, but this isn't my area of expertise AT ALL. I just know that I like it. :-) Oct 22 05 02:11 pm Link Some awesome stuff! Maybe crop Diana 1 so her unpainted chin does not show? Oct 22 05 02:19 pm Link Thank you for all the responses. Oct 25 05 08:34 am Link |