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Model

Arella

Posts: 11

Oklahoma City, Oklahoma, US

Would love feedback on these new images!!!

Oct 24 05 12:56 pm Link

Photographer

RobHowardStudios

Posts: 555

Mount Pleasant, Michigan, US

Arella wrote:
Would love feedback on these new images!!!

I'm assuming the new ones are all the group shots.

They all look really staged and don't really evoke anything. The photography and styling are OK. I just don't really see any complete images. No connection between models. No great composition. Nothing to grab the viewer.

They seem kinda like a B movie. All the elements put together, but not well executed and combined well.

Oct 24 05 03:13 pm Link

Photographer

J. Stakeman

Posts: 264

Albuquerque, New Mexico, US

That and group shots are always strange in model's portfolios.  You've got to be careful not to be lost in them.. you are represented much better when you are by yourself.. or using another model essentially as a prop

Oct 24 05 10:06 pm Link

Photographer

Stan Goldstein

Posts: 407

New York, New York, US

J. Stakeman wrote:
That and group shots are always strange in model's portfolios.  You've got to be careful not to be lost in them.. you are represented much better when you are by yourself.. or using another model essentially as a prop

Ditto.  My feeling exactly.

Oct 24 05 10:17 pm Link