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Photographer

Justin Huang

Posts: 1308

Irvine, California, US

it's also my current avatar. comments/critique?

Nov 17 05 01:41 am Link

Photographer

Adam Bouska

Posts: 47

Palm Springs, California, US

I like it, very artistic and nicely composed.

keep it up man

Nov 17 05 06:39 am Link

Photographer

Justin Huang

Posts: 1308

Irvine, California, US

thanks, Adam. i appreciate your comment. anyone else have any critique?

Nov 17 05 09:08 pm Link

Photographer

J O H N A L L A N

Posts: 12221

Los Angeles, California, US

I like it - it's a little dark though - I think it could benefit by coming up a bit and still retain the nice contrast you have.

My favorite is still the self-portrait and I like the stairs image quite a bit.

John

Nov 17 05 09:19 pm Link

Photographer

Justin Huang

Posts: 1308

Irvine, California, US

ya the orignal was underexposed. i accidentally had a polarizer on that lens. and i didn't realize that when i was switching between lenses. so yeah that wasn't fun

Nov 17 05 09:29 pm Link

Photographer

Isaac Klotz

Posts: 636

Oakland, California, US

i might throw in a little backlight on her head, or just a hair light, to bring some more shine, it could be subtle.  i use way too much backlight in my images.  :] hah..

-isaac

Nov 17 05 10:47 pm Link

Photographer

Justin Huang

Posts: 1308

Irvine, California, US

half element wrote:
i might throw in a little backlight on her head, or just a hair light, to bring some more shine, it could be subtle.  i use way too much backlight in my images.  :] hah..

-isaac

ya a hair light would have been nice. can't do hairlights or accent lights until i get another strobe though. i only have one right now. sad

Nov 19 05 01:36 am Link