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Model

Krysi

Posts: 52

Bowmanville, Ontario, Canada

Any comments, suggestions or critiques?

Nov 17 05 12:00 pm Link

Photographer

Graeme Rand

Posts: 36

New Orleans, Louisiana, US

Krysi wrote:
Any comments, suggestions or critiques?

Nov 17 05 12:06 pm Link

Photographer

Graeme Rand

Posts: 36

New Orleans, Louisiana, US

I like all of your work on your port, let me know if you ever head South!

Nov 17 05 12:07 pm Link

Photographer

Altman Photography Svcs

Posts: 75

Lakeland, Florida, US

I like your port. and IMHO would only make a few changes.  First, #1,2,4 and 5 are all distorted I would fix them or get rid of them.  Even though #1 is distorted it looks great...I love the pose and the color.  I would get rid of #11 as I don't think it is very flattering of your pretty face.  #9,14 and 16 are your best shots and the rest are good too.

Nov 17 05 01:24 pm Link

Photographer

Synergy Canada

Posts: 236

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Hi Krysi:

    The only nursing schools I am aware of in downtown T.O. are Ryerson
and U of T. The reason I mention that is because I am five minutes away from
each location.

    You need either:
    1.  Someone to help you go through your images and select the best ones.
    2.  Someone to then scan the images and balance them for you.
    3.  To shoot some new material with you.
    4.  An MUA to get you ready for a shoot.

    E-Mail me: [email protected]

    I will help you if your interested.

Nov 19 05 03:39 am Link

Photographer

joe duerr

Posts: 4227

Santa Ana, California, US

Remove the distorted images they may be of use in an art class but not in a portfolio. It looks as if you are trying to look thinner and stretching the images out. Again not in a portfolio. JMO

Nov 19 05 09:55 am Link

Photographer

Concept Photo

Posts: 243

New York, New York, US

Hello...I didn't look at enlarged views of the images, but at least two of the small images appear to be distorted.  They are vertically stretched.  I suggest revising the .jpg, so that it doesn't look distorted on MM...About your statement about not doing any kind of nude model, you might want to revise that, as the portraits of you holding the towels might be referred to "implicit nudes."  Issuing a statement like that in upper-case letters and posting images like those might not be entirely contradictory, but it calls to attention that your statement in posted entriely upper-case letters; the phrasing is emphatic, but the actions are ambiguous...I hope this helps...B.

Nov 19 05 11:15 am Link