Any comments, suggestions or critiques? Nov 17 05 12:00 pm Link Krysi wrote: Nov 17 05 12:06 pm Link I like all of your work on your port, let me know if you ever head South! Nov 17 05 12:07 pm Link I like your port. and IMHO would only make a few changes. First, #1,2,4 and 5 are all distorted I would fix them or get rid of them. Even though #1 is distorted it looks great...I love the pose and the color. I would get rid of #11 as I don't think it is very flattering of your pretty face. #9,14 and 16 are your best shots and the rest are good too. Nov 17 05 01:24 pm Link Hi Krysi: The only nursing schools I am aware of in downtown T.O. are Ryerson and U of T. The reason I mention that is because I am five minutes away from each location. You need either: 1. Someone to help you go through your images and select the best ones. 2. Someone to then scan the images and balance them for you. 3. To shoot some new material with you. 4. An MUA to get you ready for a shoot. E-Mail me: [email protected] I will help you if your interested. Nov 19 05 03:39 am Link Remove the distorted images they may be of use in an art class but not in a portfolio. It looks as if you are trying to look thinner and stretching the images out. Again not in a portfolio. JMO Nov 19 05 09:55 am Link Hello...I didn't look at enlarged views of the images, but at least two of the small images appear to be distorted. They are vertically stretched. I suggest revising the .jpg, so that it doesn't look distorted on MM...About your statement about not doing any kind of nude model, you might want to revise that, as the portraits of you holding the towels might be referred to "implicit nudes." Issuing a statement like that in upper-case letters and posting images like those might not be entirely contradictory, but it calls to attention that your statement in posted entriely upper-case letters; the phrasing is emphatic, but the actions are ambiguous...I hope this helps...B. Nov 19 05 11:15 am Link |