Forums > Critique > Please help me narrow this shoot down

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Timothy

Posts: 1618

Madison, Wisconsin, US

Note: I'm not asking for a portfolio critique, just trying to edit this set of images. Images are fetish-themed and are probably not safe for work. To me, each of these have pros and cons so I'm anxious to hear what MM thinks!

Thanks,

TMH

http://weaztek.com/forums/MM/Nix/_MG_8097.jpg

http://weaztek.com/forums/MM/Nix/_MG_8104.jpg

http://weaztek.com/forums/MM/Nix/_MG_8106.jpg

http://weaztek.com/forums/MM/Nix/_MG_8108.jpg

http://weaztek.com/forums/MM/Nix/_MG_8110.jpg

Nov 19 05 01:38 pm Link

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Digiography

Posts: 3367

Niagara Falls, Ontario, Canada

I like http://weaztek.com/forums/MM/Nix/_MG_8106.jpg, but it isn't the most flattering in regards to your breasts.

http://weaztek.com/forums/MM/Nix/_MG_8104.jpg shows off your body best.

Nov 19 05 01:48 pm Link

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Picture This

Posts: 1776

Albuquerque, New Mexico, US

8104 is my fav. I like the intensity of her eye contact and the lighting.

8110 is my second choice. I prefer the red light in this shot, and the slightly distracted look in her eyes. It adds a sense of danger.

8106 is next. Very close to 8104, which is why I list it this way, but not quite as strong, IMO. I like the tension that shows in her hand.

The others have distracting light bouncing off her arms or distracting hot spots in the BG.

Nov 19 05 01:51 pm Link

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commart

Posts: 6078

Hagerstown, Maryland, US

I don't know much about fetish but from what I've seen might characterize it as "glamour with weirdness."  On that note, I'd go with fly girl's tug on the garter.

Nov 19 05 01:56 pm Link

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BCG

Posts: 7316

San Antonio, Florida, US

imo, get rid of the last two...btw...you have inspired me to break out my old flight helmet and do a series with it.

Nov 20 05 04:14 pm Link