Hey guys. I am a new model and I am updating my portfolio. Tell me what you think of the shots I have already and let me know what type of shots I need to have in my port.

Your "X Studio" shot, the best in the lot for control of photographic quality,  buries half your face in shadow. 

Your other pictures, every single one of them, seem out of synch with your credits, which are impressive.

Apply some of your art, dance, and theater experience to your pictures and the qualities of them should change for the better, and remarkably so.