Posted by jessicaclaire: 
What do you guys think of my new stuff?

You are HOTTTTTT!!!! I would totally do TFP with you if you weren't so far away. Bummer!!

GWC!

Posted by jessicaclaire: 
What do you guys think of my new stuff?

You look great, know how to pose, and all the normal stuff.  LIke Marcus, what grabs me is that you've got a few images there that show range - that you can show more than three expressions with your face.  You've even got a couple where you show physical range, where you're doing something with your body besides a stock standard pose.

I've noticed that the portfolios that grab me and grab me hard are where in the 20 shots, I see that there are few physical or emotional limits.  Like the make a face shot.  Can the person look good, graceful, genuine, and connect with the viewer in anger, playfulness, craziness, sorrow.  And does each of them look different.  (Extreme acting test: sorrow, sadness, unhappiness, glum.  All should look different.  But for a lot of folks, it's hard to make happiness and sadness look different.) 

You've got a couple in there, but about 2/3 of the shots are within a narrow range.  if you've got range, flaunt it!  That makes you WAY different, and able to work in a ton more situations.