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Monsante Bey

Posts: 2111

Columbus, Georgia, US

The model didn't like the first image I posted, so i went with one she liked. It's my avatar pic, so lay it on me.

Jul 05 05 09:57 am Link

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StudioGuru

Posts: 150

Swindon, England, United Kingdom

I glad the model liked the image, its so cool being able to give pleasure to beautiful, lush, hot women. 

Great pose, great outfit, great model, not sure about the blue I think its a bit too much and what is that location?  At first I thought she was going to take a shit, but now I not so sure, is it a shower cubicle? 

Mind you, I love to see her take a shit, that would be so cool!!!!

Jul 05 05 10:21 am Link

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Monsante Bey

Posts: 2111

Columbus, Georgia, US

lol, yer sick!

it's actually a small, narrow closet. I shot it ententionally in blue like this to add a sensual effect for the outfit. I probably should have had her spread her feet apart to enhance it. It's cool, we'll make it up on our next shoot.

Jul 05 05 11:16 am Link

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XtremeArtists

Posts: 9122


It needs to be rotated counter clockwise about 3 degrees or so.

Keep the verticals perfectly vertical, and the horizontals perfectly horizontal.

This way you will have a line study for your model to work in.

Either that or use a drastic angle, same idea about the line study, only this way there would be more tension.

The way it is now, just a little off, isn't the best.

Jul 05 05 11:21 am Link

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Low Tek Photography

Posts: 597

Atlanta, Georgia, US

I agree the blue is a bit much. A slight different pose would've pull off the shot perfectly. I think the angle wouldn't have been so noticeable if you shot the model further back into the closet so you wouldn't catch that corner on the left. The full size image looks a bit noisy and pixelated. Was it the high ISO on your camera or just too much JPG compression?

Jul 05 05 01:41 pm Link

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Monsante Bey

Posts: 2111

Columbus, Georgia, US

Yea, I see all of that. My thing was no tripod, and had I made her step back further, she would have been ducking.

With my shots, I shoot film mostly, so the transfer is just ghah!!! But naturally if I printed an 8x10 from the negative, it's crystal clear.

I need to go digital.

Jul 05 05 05:25 pm Link

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XtremeArtists

Posts: 9122

Posted by Monsante Bey: 
Yea, I see all of that. My thing was no tripod

It's never to late to rotate it slightly in Photoshop if you wanted to.

Jul 05 05 05:40 pm Link

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Monsante Bey

Posts: 2111

Columbus, Georgia, US

Posted by XtremeArtists: 

Posted by Monsante Bey: 
Yea, I see all of that. My thing was no tripod

It's never to late to rotate it slightly in Photoshop if you wanted to.

Debating on if I want to be a lazy azz or not.

Jul 05 05 06:24 pm Link

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XtremeArtists

Posts: 9122

Posted by Monsante Bey: 

Posted by XtremeArtists: 

Posted by Monsante Bey: 
Yea, I see all of that. My thing was no tripod

It's never to late to rotate it slightly in Photoshop if you wanted to.

Debating on if I want to be a lazy azz or not.

LOL I have the same struggle some days myself...

Jul 05 05 06:40 pm Link

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Rick Edwards

Posts: 6185

Wilmington, Delaware, US

sometimes lazy is just another work for extremely efficient use of energy and time...lol

Jul 05 05 10:19 pm Link

Photographer

Monsante Bey

Posts: 2111

Columbus, Georgia, US

lol

And for the last time, the blue is a desired effect...

Go get the belt.

Jul 06 05 04:41 am Link