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BlackSkyPhoto

Posts: 1130

Danville, California, US


So I have no experience with firework / night photography - Just beautiful girls.....

Went out and got this - curious what people think

https://blackdiamondproductions.net/test/fireworks.jpg


Jul 06 05 12:33 am Link

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XtremeArtists

Posts: 9122

Posted by Brent Burzycki: 

So I have no experience with firework / night photography - Just beautiful girls.....

Went out and got this - curious what people think

https://blackdiamondproductions.net/test/fireworks.jpg

The image isn't loading right now, but you have the img tag set correctly.

I couldn't open it even when I put the address into the browser...seems like a server issue...

Jul 06 05 12:44 am Link

Photographer

BlackSkyPhoto

Posts: 1130

Danville, California, US

Posted by XtremeArtists: 

Posted by Brent Burzycki: 

So I have no experience with firework / night photography - Just beautiful girls.....

Went out and got this - curious what people think

https://blackdiamondproductions.net/test/fireworks.jpg

The image isn't loading right now, but you have the img tag set correctly.

I couldn't open it even when I put the address into the browser...seems like a server issue...

Jul 06 05 01:02 am Link

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XtremeArtists

Posts: 9122

Posted by Brent Burzycki: 

Posted by XtremeArtists: 

Posted by Brent Burzycki: 

So I have no experience with firework / night photography - Just beautiful girls.....

Went out and got this - curious what people think

https://blackdiamondproductions.net/test/fireworks.jpg

The image isn't loading right now, but you have the img tag set correctly.

I couldn't open it even when I put the address into the browser...seems like a server issue...

still not loading...in case the image is in your cache and you are seeing it.

Jul 06 05 01:19 am Link

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BlackSkyPhoto

Posts: 1130

Danville, California, US

Did MM Start blocking images or something.....

Or images over a certain size.....

It loads here - and the server it is hosted on is fine....

Oh well

Jul 06 05 10:23 am Link

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RFAphoto

Posts: 223

Phoenix, Arizona, US

I see the image fine, my only critique would be it looks too "busy" maybe a slightly shorter exposure next time

Jul 06 05 10:27 am Link

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XtremeArtists

Posts: 9122

I can't connect to your server from the East Coast.

Jul 06 05 11:36 am Link

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StudioGuru

Posts: 150

Swindon, England, United Kingdom

I can sit fine in Colonial HQ. 

Idepenance Day, theres rubbing our nose in it!!!

I think most folks will like it and if you have 4th July greetings card, it would sell.

well done

Jul 06 05 12:39 pm Link

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Ty Simone

Posts: 2885

Edison, New Jersey, US

Posted by tony1989tony: 
I can sit fine in Colonial HQ. 

Idepenance Day, theres rubbing our nose in it!!!

I think most folks will like it and if you have 4th July greetings card, it would sell.

well done

Didn't you guys revoke our independence when We could not count the votes in Florida?

http://groundstate.ca/node/429

Jul 06 05 12:55 pm Link

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StudioGuru

Posts: 150

Swindon, England, United Kingdom

Congratulations on making up part of the 2.15%

When is the first shipment of slaves due into Bristol?

Jul 06 05 02:01 pm Link

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Ty Simone

Posts: 2885

Edison, New Jersey, US

Posted by tony1989tony: 
Congratulations on making up part of the 2.15%

When is the first shipment of slaves due into Bristol?

I am still collecting them.
I hear a bunch are gathering in NYC this friday (July 8th)
I will see what I can do! :-)

Jul 06 05 02:11 pm Link

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Sarah Prankha

Posts: 202

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

Posted by Brent Burzycki: 

So I have no experience with firework / night photography - Just beautiful girls.....

Went out and got this - curious what people think

https://blackdiamondproductions.net/test/fireworks.jpg


It might be a tad too busy... the fire work in the upper left corner, though. I wish that could be cropped into its own picture - i love how you can see the burst in the middle as well as the color streams.

Jul 06 05 04:33 pm Link

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BlackSkyPhoto

Posts: 1130

Danville, California, US

Sadly this is really low -res here - at full size in 13x19 is it pretty cool...

I like the busy.... I have others that are singles - but the part about this was the chaos - it really did look like a war zone after this batch went off - with the hill in front of them the dim lower shots were illuminating the hill just like watching a distant lightning storm or bombs going off int eh distance....

It was an eary feeling that was also cool and made you remember we still have troops fighting it out for us all over the world...

Very 4th...

Jul 06 05 11:20 pm Link