Please check out the 20 pics on my page and leave some comments on the photos you like.  I've got new ones to put and and don't know which ones to pull down.

Thanks
Livia

Although your poses vary,your facial expression doesnt vary too much.  Your smile is the same in most of the shots. I saw the OMP pics. I like the artistic ones.  I like the one of you stretched out in the limo. However it would have been better with a solid dress or really dressy dress and a more serious facial expression. You are in a limo so play the role of a superstar with attitude. Get into your environment and have fun with it. I know I'm new here and new into the serious side of photography, but I'm looking at things using my industrial design background.  I see shape and form.  I see the body as a form that you can shape and make appealing.

Step out of your comfort zone
Do something crazy and wild with makeup and pose

You have several motorcyle poses - choose one and delete the rest.  Same advice for the multiple car themed photos.  That should free up some space for you!

Charlie

I would also say loose the bum shot
You show it in other shots, so there is no need for a close up