Forums > Critique > First professional shots... feedback?

Model

Istina Lozhny

Posts: 12

Seoul, Seoul, Korea (South)

The first one's up (Pinup?), and I'll be adding more today as I clean them up... 

Feedback, suggestions, constructive criticism begged for!

Jul 10 05 01:38 pm Link

Photographer

Marcus J. Ranum

Posts: 3247

MORRISDALE, Pennsylvania, US

I'm not sure what I think of it; you look like you're about to say something to someone who's out of the frame. Instead of giving the image an emotional impact, it looks like you were interrupted in a private moment.

mjr.

Jul 10 05 01:44 pm Link