Jun 06 11 09:02 am Link

Model

e-string

Posts: 24002

Kansas City, Missouri, US

Has the photographer expressly given permission for his/her work to be edited by someone else?

Jun 06 11 09:13 am Link

Model

EmmyXoXoXo

Posts: 84

Rochester, New York, US

e-string wrote:
Has the photographer expressly given permission for his/her work to be edited by someone else?

Yes she gave me full permission

Jun 06 11 09:15 am Link

Photographer

PHOTOGRAPHY BY ED NUNES

Posts: 270

Orlando, Florida, US

Here's my opinions:

The background does not match the theme.  Find an urban environment where you can shoot without any legal problems.

You hair is too much over your eyes.  The photographer should have seen that and fixed it.

You may want to use a mua to get the best possible images.

I would use a bounce reflector or a fill flash to get more light to your face and have the sun behind you to give you a nature hair light.

Just my 2 cents.  But worth trying

Jun 06 11 09:24 am Link

Photographer

Matt Schmidt Photo

Posts: 3709

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

wish you were closer . . . we'd shoot some cool stuff.

these shots do not properly address lighting . . . and k value is off

Jun 06 11 09:33 am Link

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tommytomaso

Posts: 73

Carefree, Arizona, US

Jun 06 11 10:17 am Link

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Elise Copeland

Posts: 141

Tulare, California, US

DIGITAL DREAMS OF FL wrote:
Here's my opinions:

The background does not match the theme.  Find an urban environment where you can shoot without any legal problems.

You hair is too much over your eyes.  The photographer should have seen that and fixed it.

You may want to use a mua to get the best possible images.

I would use a bounce reflector or a fill flash to get more light to your face and have the sun behind you to give you a nature hair light.

Just my 2 cents.  But worth trying

Shes not asking for a critique, shes asking if anyone can help her...

Jun 06 11 03:05 pm Link

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Elise Copeland

Posts: 141

Tulare, California, US

I do love the suckerpunch theme though =]

I might give one a go, but I dont know how soon it'll be done, you wouldnt happen to have any bigger images would you?

=]

Jun 06 11 03:07 pm Link

Model

EmmyXoXoXo

Posts: 84

Rochester, New York, US

Thanks. She only gave me those sizes... Sorry sad

Jun 06 11 10:35 pm Link