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Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Miser Phototgraphy wrote:

Possibly. The image is a bit dark but looks like you've captured the model well and I like the effect you've created.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150111/02/54b2509226de9_m.jpg

Feb 04 15 01:31 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

VOLUME - Photography wrote:
Do me please big_smile

Possibly. I am not a fan of the black background especially with a black outfit but in this image you have still managed to make the model stand out. The outfit looks great on her and the posing is good as well. Hair and makeup are done well. The expression is fierce, a little too much though.

I like better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150124/01/54c368485c1d9_m.jpg

Feb 04 15 01:33 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Sergey A Larin wrote:
I'm in.

Yes. Even though I think the skin is a bit too retouched/perfect, I like the lighting and  the smoothness of the image. The model's features are lovely as well as her makeup. Expression is a bit blank though.

Decent:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131220/10/52b48a65099b3_m.jpg

Feb 04 15 01:35 pm Link

Model

Pauline Yee

Posts: 406

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

Me please.

Feb 04 15 01:55 pm Link

Photographer

Joe Dawn

Posts: 4

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

How about mine?

Feb 04 15 03:07 pm Link

Photographer

Stone Groove

Posts: 302

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

Sure, I'll play!

Feb 04 15 03:15 pm Link

Photographer

Sergey A Larin

Posts: 27

İstanbul, İstanbul, Turkey

winking_wonder wrote:

Yes.  ... skipped...

Thank you! Unfortunately I just remove this photo and upload some new.

Feb 04 15 03:19 pm Link

Photographer

Twisting Light

Posts: 75

Seattle, Washington, US

How about me?

Feb 04 15 04:10 pm Link

Photographer

Joseph Kaminski

Posts: 23

Harrison, New York, US

Uploaded some new work. Lets try this again. I would like to know.

Feb 04 15 06:32 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

brunoalves wrote:
Me, please.

Yes. I like the colors and lighting. Nice outfit on the model, decent pose and lovely makeup. You've captured the model's features and figure well. Expression is pretty good too.

Feb 05 15 01:33 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

K  Mariee wrote:
Well 👀👀 opinion kinda new so I'm curious

No. This looks like a snap shot and not a very flattering one- Your expression/pose is not great (you look perturbed a bit) and the angle is not the best. The dress does look good on you though.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150106/11/54ac3de33b904_m.jpg

Feb 05 15 01:34 pm Link

Photographer

Posh Rocket Studio

Posts: 136

Skowhegan, Maine, US

Please, when you have a moment.

Feb 05 15 01:53 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Pixie Galore wrote:
Just swapped out my avatar, wondering what your thoughts are!

Maybe. I don't love the image- the lighting is too blown out, your expression is not very good- not engaging/emotive at all and it looks like you're just staring.. And the pose is awkward.

Feb 05 15 01:58 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Dp Demis Photography wrote:
I`m in wink

Maybe. The image is a bit darker than I like - I don't really like black backgrounds but you've captured the model's facial features (especially those big blue eyes) well and I do like the shirt/necklace on her. Nice makeup too. Expression is quite blank though.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140501/20/53630cff6011b_m.jpg

Feb 05 15 02:05 pm Link

Retoucher

holypony

Posts: 39

Saint Petersburg, Saint Petersburg, Russia

Hi! I'm newbie here and I am really interested in your opinion

Feb 06 15 03:28 am Link

Model

SilkyHush

Posts: 14

Rome, Lazio, Italy

me please smile

Feb 09 15 12:23 pm Link

Photographer

REBEL iPHOTO

Posts: 7

Miami Beach, Florida, US

What about mines?

Feb 10 15 06:42 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Pauline Yee wrote:
Me please.

No. I think the makeup looks a bit unnatural- too much blush and not enough color- it makes you look older than you are. Also the expression is quite blank, the outfit uninteresting and the pose awkward.

Better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140526/23/53843705b040c_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140929/21/542a2b707ed39_m.jpg

Feb 12 15 10:09 am Link

Photographer

Mister Sifuentes

Posts: 1078

San Antonio, Texas, US

Shoot!

Feb 12 15 10:10 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Joe Dawn - My Private Spaces wrote:
How about mine?

Yes. I love the black and white tones and the model is extremely sensual/sexy. You've captured her pose, expression, outfit perfectly. Really nice background too!

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150131/21/54cdbebb28ea3_m.jpg

Feb 13 15 12:51 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Stone Groove wrote:
Sure, I'll play!

Yes! I love the vibrant colors and the smoothness of the image. Beautiful capture of a beautiful model. Expression and pose is very good, as is the styling -makeup is flawless!

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140313/13/53221b081a574_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130503/09/5183e81122b06_m.jpg

Feb 13 15 01:44 pm Link

Photographer

Mark Corben

Posts: 5

Los Angeles, California, US

What do you think?

Feb 13 15 01:53 pm Link

Model

Ohka

Posts: 37

Trier, Rhineland-Palatinate, Germany

do you?smile

Feb 14 15 12:25 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Twisting Light wrote:
How about me?

Yes! I love the color scheme, the background, the outfit on the model, and heels. However, I think the bracelets are a bit too much though (I would take off the blue one- it's unnecessary and the color clashes) and the model's pose looks stiff and her expression is quite blank.

Feb 17 15 09:04 am Link

Photographer

Red Paddy

Posts: 23

Bargoed, Wales, United Kingdom

Yes please.

Feb 17 15 09:09 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Joseph Kaminski Photography wrote:
Uploaded some new work. Lets try this again. I would like to know.

Yes, beautiful emotive capture of the model. I really like how her hair is around her face and the outfit/pose looks great.

Feb 20 15 09:59 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Ernest Sambrano wrote:
Please, when you have a moment.

Yes! I love the black and white tones, and the smooth quality of the image. The styling is superb as is the model's pose. Lovely capture and great eye contact.

Also like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150201/17/54ced22f4bcf2_m.jpg

Feb 20 15 10:01 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

pure_m wrote:
Hi! I'm newbie here and I am really interested in your opinion

Yes, beautiful work. Very high quality/fashion feel. I love the smoothness of the image and the vibrancy of the colors- the models' blue eyes and red lips. Skin and hair look perfect too.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150218/10/54e4de17a192f_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150130/04/54cb79119b1db_m.jpg

Feb 20 15 10:04 am Link

Photographer

Romero-Photo

Posts: 7

Los Angeles, California, US

Okay lets hear it.

Feb 20 15 10:06 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

SilkyHush wrote:
me please smile

No, this is clearly a snap shot and not a flattering one. The lighting is completely off so that you're washed out, your pose is awkward, your expression looks surprised and the location is out of place (since you are in a bikini)

Perhaps:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141018/05/54425b02b73f8_m.jpg

Feb 20 15 10:06 am Link

Photographer

Revenge Photography

Posts: 1905

Horsham, Victoria, Australia

I just changed my avatar so I'm game.

Feb 20 15 10:07 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

REBEL iPHOTO wrote:
What about mines?

Yes, I like the close up especially the detail. Beautiful model and nice capture of her features/skin etc. Expression is quite good as well- emotive.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131023/17/5268696aae0f7_m.jpg

Feb 20 15 10:08 am Link

Model

Morgan_Rose

Posts: 407

Brooklyn, New York, US

Me? smile

Feb 20 15 05:50 pm Link

Makeup Artist

Sophia Porter

Posts: 34

Lemont, Illinois, US

How about me? smile

Feb 20 15 05:56 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Mister Sifuentes wrote:
Shoot!

Possibly. I normally do not like photos that are too dark and especially don't like the combination of dark background and dark outfit (all black) but here it's executed well. The outfit looks good on the model and she has nice hair/features- You've captured her beautifully and the makeup is lovely. However, the expression is kind of blank and  the pose is just there

Nice:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37958377 18+

Feb 20 15 09:09 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Mark Corben wrote:
What do you think?

No. The outfit & hair doesn't really go well with the sophistication of the hat or the sunglasses . Also can't make out the model's expression etc.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150217/17/54e3e488e8fb4_m.jpg

Feb 20 15 09:12 pm Link

Model

Margaretha

Posts: 24

Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands

me?

Feb 22 15 04:53 pm Link

Model

sarah tonin

Posts: 107

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

Okay! big_smile

Feb 22 15 05:45 pm Link

Model

serge333

Posts: 2

Los Angeles, California, US

Whata bout me😁

Feb 23 15 02:36 am Link

Photographer

DespayreFX

Posts: 1481

Delta, British Columbia, Canada

K,  hit me.  :-)

Feb 23 15 01:26 pm Link