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Photographer

Joseph Reed Photography

Posts: 2243

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

Ladies,

I will tell you the following.

1.  Best image and why
2.  Worst image and why
3.  Best physical Feature and why
4.  Worst physical feature and why
5.  Physical Beauty on scale of 1-10
6.  Sex appeal on scale of 1-10
7.  What I would do to your port to make it better
8.  Are you list worthy?
9.  Somewhat lengthy discussion of what you need to do to your port to imprive
10.  What I think the types of photos you should be amazing at.
11.  Would I pay you to shoot or would I shoot TFCD with you or not at all?

As always, I'll be honest, but not intentionally mean.  No need to check back as I wll send you a message when I am done.

Sep 28 12 01:27 pm Link

Model

Nataly G

Posts: 117

Reading, England, United Kingdom

Let me know smile

Sep 28 12 01:49 pm Link

Photographer

Joseph Reed Photography

Posts: 2243

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

Evalia wrote:
Let me know smile

1.  Best image and why
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120629/18/4fee5095117fb_m.jpg
I like this one because it seems to capture a free spirit...kinda has a throw back look to the 70s feel about it.
2.  Worst image and why
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110606/15/4ded58c8e1530_m.jpg
a lot of your images are about the same level from a quality perspective...I chose this one because of what I think is an overly soft look about it.
3.  Best physical Feature and why lips...nice and full
4.  Worst physical feature and why really hard to tell....all of your images have you dressed from head to toe...so hard to get a good look at your body/curves...
5.  Physical Beauty on scale of 1-10 6.5
6.  Sex appeal on scale of 1-10 6...lower sex appeal purely because of your port...it's more fashion oriented...that's not bad...it just doesn't lend itself to sexy...not saying you couldn't pull it off if you wanted to.
7.  What I would do to your port to make it better I would toss up a couple of pin up images and I would add a variety of expressions on your face
8.  Are you list worthy? nothing in my current lists IMO
9.  Somewhat lengthy discussion of what you need to do to your port to improve
you seem to have the posing down and the attitude, but the facial expressions are all the same...or pretty close to the same...mix it up a little but...you're allowed to smile if you want...
10.  What I think the types of photos you should be amazing at. I would love to see you do some retro 70s and 60s type of images.
11.  Would I pay you to shoot or would I shoot TFCD with you or not at all? TFCD.

Sep 28 12 02:51 pm Link

Model

Jenny Jannetty

Posts: 449

Roanoke, Virginia, US

I asked for you to look at mine on your last thread, but got skipped sad

Sep 28 12 03:38 pm Link

Model

Heather Smythe

Posts: 367

Sacramento, California, US

How sweet of you to do this! I'd love to know smile

Sep 28 12 05:39 pm Link

Photographer

Joseph Reed Photography

Posts: 2243

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

Jenny Jannetty wrote:
I asked for you to look at mine on your last thread, but got skipped sad

No pouty faces!!!

1.  Best image and why
18+


nice and classy...sexy and cute...well done
2.  Worst image and why
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120928/15/506622b2a5e97_m.jpg
these images with the model sticking a body part through a photo frame either look really cool or just fall flat...it's not easy to do...IMO these fall flat

3.  Best physical Feature and why love love love your breasts....
4.  Worst physical feature and why nose...seems a bit wide
5.  Physical Beauty on scale of 1-10 7
6.  Sex appeal on scale of 1-10 6.5
7.  What I would do to your port to make it better it seems as though you spend time on getting a wardrobe or setting all lined up and then there's just something missing from the image...kinda like there was no direction for the shot...kinda through it together...oh let's try this....
8.  Are you list worthy? nothing in my current lists.
9.  Somewhat lengthy discussion of what you need to do to your port to improve
work on facial expressions....if you're going to stick a violin between your legs, what are you trying to say?  Say something with your images...glam it up a little bit...plan something out and take the time to get it right.
10.  What I think the types of photos you should be amazing at. think you could do some cool pinup
11.  Would I pay you to shoot or would I shoot TFCD with you or not at all? TFCD

Sep 28 12 07:03 pm Link

Model

Jenny Jannetty

Posts: 449

Roanoke, Virginia, US

Thank you for the input!  I appreciate it!  smile

Sep 28 12 07:14 pm Link

Model

steph amberlyn stewart

Posts: 34

Brantford, Ontario, Canada

i wanna know alsol:p if you find the time of course:)

Sep 28 12 07:19 pm Link

Photographer

Joseph Reed Photography

Posts: 2243

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

Heather Smythe wrote:
How sweet of you to do this! I'd love to know smile

Heather, I just reviewed you a day or two ago.

Sep 29 12 05:01 am Link

Photographer

Joseph Reed Photography

Posts: 2243

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

steph amberlyn stewart wrote:
i wanna know alsol:p if you find the time of course:)

Steph,

I sent you a PM as requested.

Sep 29 12 05:02 am Link

Model

Cashe Monet

Posts: 378

Los Angeles, California, US

Go for it smile

Sep 29 12 10:26 am Link

Model

Lela Jesse

Posts: 1148

Arcata, California, US

me please! This sounds like great information. Thank you!

Sep 29 12 10:29 am Link

Model

Zoe Chanel

Posts: 164

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Let me know smile

Sep 29 12 01:58 pm Link

Photographer

Joseph Reed Photography

Posts: 2243

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

zoe chanel wrote:
Let me know smile

1.  Best image and why
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120730/19/50174577a332a_m.jpg
just a clean simply image, but those eyes just pulled me in...very nice
2.  Worst image and why
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120520/21/4fb9c0d761edb_m.jpg
there's nothing to this image at all...not fashion, not glam, not sexy, not dramatic, not well framed, not cool colors...it's just bad all around...there's a reason you have 160+ views and no comments on it...

3.  Best physical Feature and why
very pretty eyes...great color
4.  Worst physical feature and why
lips...upper lip thin...based on your images, it's hard to say anything about your body as your fully covered in almost all images...that's not bad, just hard to make any comments in that area.
5.  Physical Beauty on scale of 1-10 6
6.  Sex appeal on scale of 1-10 5(your images are not glam/sexy, they are more cutesie....
7.  What I would do to your port to make it better toss some glam in there and make a dramatic themed shoot...
8.  Are you list worthy? nothing in my current lists.
9.  Somewhat lengthy discussion of what you need to do to your port to improve - vary it up...put some pinup in there, some glam, some high fashion, until you find what you like and what you are good at...so many models want to do "fashion" and they are mediocre at best....then they stumble upon the fact they are good at pinup or boudoir or drama or whatever....take the time to find what you are good at, not necessarily what you think you are good at.
10.  What I think the types of photos you should be amazing at. hard to say at this point until I see more variety
11.  Would I pay you to shoot or would I shoot TFCD with you or not at all? TFCD

Sep 29 12 04:18 pm Link

Photographer

Joseph Reed Photography

Posts: 2243

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

Lela Jesse wrote:
me please! This sounds like great information. Thank you!

1.  Best image and why
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110208/21/4d5226794102e_m.jpg
love the sign and I'm a sucker for BW images
2.  Worst image and why
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120508/20/4fa9e57c611f7_m.jpg
PM me and I'll tell you...I can't explain without violating MM rules
3.  Best physical Feature and why lips...nice big juicy lips
4.  Worst physical feature and why nose...I'd slim it down a little but
5.  Physical Beauty on scale of 1-10 7
6.  Sex appeal on scale of 1-10 6.5
7.  What I would do to your port to make it better more diversity...spread it out among the various areas of the modeling spectrum...add some glam and pinup, etc
8.  Are you list worthy? nothing in my current lists
11.  Would I pay you to shoot or would I shoot TFCD with you or not at all? TFCD

Sep 29 12 04:27 pm Link

Photographer

Joseph Reed Photography

Posts: 2243

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

Cashe Monet wrote:
Go for it smile

I'll get back to you shortly

Sep 29 12 04:27 pm Link

Model

Elesha Eden

Posts: 477

Southampton, England, United Kingdom

Hiya
oh my i wonder what im letting myself in for
yes please im forever looking to improve

x

Sep 30 12 12:47 pm Link

Model

Affinity Finch

Posts: 652

Bodmin, England, United Kingdom

Im game!

Sep 30 12 01:21 pm Link

Model

Kimfit

Posts: 1

Cleveland, Ohio, US

Joseph Reed Photography wrote:
Ladies,

I will tell you the following.

1.  Best image and why
2.  Worst image and why
3.  Best physical Feature and why
4.  Worst physical feature and why
5.  Physical Beauty on scale of 1-10
6.  Sex appeal on scale of 1-10
7.  What I would do to your port to make it better
8.  Are you list worthy?
9.  Somewhat lengthy discussion of what you need to do to your port to imprive
10.  What I think the types of photos you should be amazing at.
11.  Would I pay you to shoot or would I shoot TFCD with you or not at all?

As always, I'll be honest, but not intentionally mean.  No need to check back as I wll send you a message when I am done.

Sep 30 12 01:29 pm Link

Model

Ashley Alexiss

Posts: 291

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Chiming in

Sep 30 12 01:42 pm Link

Model

AlliRae

Posts: 26

Orlando, Florida, US

I would love to hear your thoughts if you have time. Thanks

Sep 30 12 01:51 pm Link

Photographer

Joseph Reed Photography

Posts: 2243

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

Ashley Alexiss wrote:
Chiming in

I just recently commented on your port in another thread....

Sep 30 12 03:03 pm Link

Model

youngrebeldesigns

Posts: 27

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

This sounds great!! smile Please, tell me.

Oct 01 12 02:20 pm Link

Model

Sarah_Elisabeth

Posts: 266

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

me?

Oct 04 12 12:55 am Link

Model

Paradise The Goddess

Posts: 1

Columbus, Mississippi, US

ok i want your opinions

Oct 04 12 01:03 am Link

Model

Alyson Pink

Posts: 32

Los Angeles, California, US

^ Mississippi!!

LOL, I wanna know

Oct 04 12 01:20 am Link

Model

Kimmi Fox

Posts: 81

London, England, United Kingdom

I'm slightly curious, as I'm new, would be great to get some feed back and learn and improve myself. Would it be possible in a PM though?

Oct 04 12 01:27 am Link

Photographer

Adam Mohammed

Posts: 39

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Hi, I would really appreciate it if you can give me any feedback on the female models in my portfolio. Is it okay if you can private message me? Please let me know as I would love to hear your thoughts. Thank you very much for your time.

Oct 04 12 02:28 am Link

Model

Nikita Rumyantseva

Posts: 343

Cardiff, Wales, United Kingdom

Please let me know smile

Oct 06 12 08:08 am Link

Model

Christi Camden

Posts: 39

Birmingham, Alabama, US

I'd like to know!

Oct 13 12 04:58 am Link

Model

Rachael Bueckert

Posts: 1121

Red Deer, Alberta, Canada

Love too smile

Oct 13 12 07:52 pm Link

Model

Alivia Autumn

Posts: 610

Albuquerque, New Mexico, US

Pretty please

Oct 18 12 11:31 pm Link

Model

EmilyDoll

Posts: 399

Fontana, California, US

me plz

Oct 19 12 06:35 am Link

Model

Maria Susanti

Posts: 546

Banyuwangi, Jawa Timur, Indonesia

me please?

Oct 19 12 09:21 am Link

Model

Katie Pagani

Posts: 248

New York, New York, US

This would definitely be helpful!

Oct 25 12 08:16 am Link

Model

Meghan Devlin

Posts: 683

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

I would love your opinion. smile

Oct 27 12 12:30 pm Link

Model

Alixx Rose

Posts: 225

Atlanta, Georgia, US

yes, a real critique!

Nov 04 12 02:37 pm Link

Model

Maggie Xia

Posts: 452

Atlanta, Georgia, US

This seems like fun =p

Nov 04 12 03:54 pm Link

Model

Jojo West

Posts: 972

Silver Spring, Maryland, US

I'd like to know...be gentle smile

Nov 04 12 04:00 pm Link

Model

Maruschke

Posts: 543

Darfield, Canterbury, New Zealand

That would be amazing

Nov 04 12 05:47 pm Link