Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Ladies, I will tell you the following. 1. Best image and why 2. Worst image and why 3. Best physical Feature and why 4. Worst physical feature and why 5. Physical Beauty on scale of 1-10 6. Sex appeal on scale of 1-10 7. What I would do to your port to make it better 8. Are you list worthy? 9. Somewhat lengthy discussion of what you need to do to your port to imprive 10. What I think the types of photos you should be amazing at. 11. Would I pay you to shoot or would I shoot TFCD with you or not at all? As always, I'll be honest, but not intentionally mean. No need to check back as I wll send you a message when I am done.
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Nataly G
Posts: 117
London, England, United Kingdom
Let me know
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Evalia wrote: Let me know 1. Best image and why I like this one because it seems to capture a free spirit...kinda has a throw back look to the 70s feel about it. 2. Worst image and why a lot of your images are about the same level from a quality perspective...I chose this one because of what I think is an overly soft look about it. 3. Best physical Feature and why lips...nice and full 4. Worst physical feature and why really hard to tell....all of your images have you dressed from head to toe...so hard to get a good look at your body/curves... 5. Physical Beauty on scale of 1-10 6.5 6. Sex appeal on scale of 1-10 6...lower sex appeal purely because of your port...it's more fashion oriented...that's not bad...it just doesn't lend itself to sexy...not saying you couldn't pull it off if you wanted to. 7. What I would do to your port to make it better I would toss up a couple of pin up images and I would add a variety of expressions on your face 8. Are you list worthy? nothing in my current lists IMO 9. Somewhat lengthy discussion of what you need to do to your port to improve you seem to have the posing down and the attitude, but the facial expressions are all the same...or pretty close to the same...mix it up a little but...you're allowed to smile if you want... 10. What I think the types of photos you should be amazing at. I would love to see you do some retro 70s and 60s type of images. 11. Would I pay you to shoot or would I shoot TFCD with you or not at all? TFCD.
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Jenny Jannetty
Posts: 449
Roanoke, Virginia, US
I asked for you to look at mine on your last thread, but got skipped
Model
Heather Smythe
Posts: 367
Sacramento, California, US
How sweet of you to do this! I'd love to know
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Jenny Jannetty wrote: I asked for you to look at mine on your last thread, but got skipped No pouty faces!!! 1. Best image and why 18+ nice and classy...sexy and cute...well done 2. Worst image and why these images with the model sticking a body part through a photo frame either look really cool or just fall flat...it's not easy to do...IMO these fall flat 3. Best physical Feature and why love love love your breasts.... 4. Worst physical feature and why nose...seems a bit wide 5. Physical Beauty on scale of 1-10 7 6. Sex appeal on scale of 1-10 6.5 7. What I would do to your port to make it better it seems as though you spend time on getting a wardrobe or setting all lined up and then there's just something missing from the image...kinda like there was no direction for the shot...kinda through it together...oh let's try this.... 8. Are you list worthy? nothing in my current lists. 9. Somewhat lengthy discussion of what you need to do to your port to improve work on facial expressions....if you're going to stick a violin between your legs, what are you trying to say? Say something with your images...glam it up a little bit...plan something out and take the time to get it right. 10. What I think the types of photos you should be amazing at. think you could do some cool pinup 11. Would I pay you to shoot or would I shoot TFCD with you or not at all? TFCD
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Jenny Jannetty
Posts: 449
Roanoke, Virginia, US
Thank you for the input! I appreciate it!
Model
steph amberlyn stewart
Posts: 34
Hamilton, Ontario, Canada
i wanna know alsol:p if you find the time of course:)
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Heather Smythe wrote: How sweet of you to do this! I'd love to know Heather, I just reviewed you a day or two ago.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
steph amberlyn stewart wrote: i wanna know alsol:p if you find the time of course:) Steph, I sent you a PM as requested.
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Cashe Monet
Posts: 378
Los Angeles, California, US
Go for it
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Lela Jesse
Posts: 1148
Shasta Lake, California, US
me please! This sounds like great information. Thank you!
Model
Zoe Chanel
Posts: 164
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia
Let me know
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
zoe chanel wrote: Let me know 1. Best image and why just a clean simply image, but those eyes just pulled me in...very nice 2. Worst image and why there's nothing to this image at all...not fashion, not glam, not sexy, not dramatic, not well framed, not cool colors...it's just bad all around...there's a reason you have 160+ views and no comments on it... 3. Best physical Feature and why very pretty eyes...great color 4. Worst physical feature and why lips...upper lip thin...based on your images, it's hard to say anything about your body as your fully covered in almost all images...that's not bad, just hard to make any comments in that area. 5. Physical Beauty on scale of 1-10 6 6. Sex appeal on scale of 1-10 5(your images are not glam/sexy, they are more cutesie.... 7. What I would do to your port to make it better toss some glam in there and make a dramatic themed shoot... 8. Are you list worthy? nothing in my current lists. 9. Somewhat lengthy discussion of what you need to do to your port to improve - vary it up...put some pinup in there, some glam, some high fashion, until you find what you like and what you are good at...so many models want to do "fashion" and they are mediocre at best....then they stumble upon the fact they are good at pinup or boudoir or drama or whatever....take the time to find what you are good at, not necessarily what you think you are good at. 10. What I think the types of photos you should be amazing at. hard to say at this point until I see more variety 11. Would I pay you to shoot or would I shoot TFCD with you or not at all? TFCD
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Lela Jesse wrote: me please! This sounds like great information. Thank you! 1. Best image and why love the sign and I'm a sucker for BW images 2. Worst image and why PM me and I'll tell you...I can't explain without violating MM rules 3. Best physical Feature and why lips...nice big juicy lips 4. Worst physical feature and why nose...I'd slim it down a little but 5. Physical Beauty on scale of 1-10 7 6. Sex appeal on scale of 1-10 6.5 7. What I would do to your port to make it better more diversity...spread it out among the various areas of the modeling spectrum...add some glam and pinup, etc 8. Are you list worthy? nothing in my current lists 11. Would I pay you to shoot or would I shoot TFCD with you or not at all? TFCD
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Cashe Monet wrote: Go for it I'll get back to you shortly
Model
Elesha Eden
Posts: 588
London, England, United Kingdom
Hiya oh my i wonder what im letting myself in for yes please im forever looking to improve x
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Kimfit
Posts: 1
Cleveland, Ohio, US
Joseph Reed Photography wrote: Ladies, I will tell you the following. 1. Best image and why 2. Worst image and why 3. Best physical Feature and why 4. Worst physical feature and why 5. Physical Beauty on scale of 1-10 6. Sex appeal on scale of 1-10 7. What I would do to your port to make it better 8. Are you list worthy? 9. Somewhat lengthy discussion of what you need to do to your port to imprive 10. What I think the types of photos you should be amazing at. 11. Would I pay you to shoot or would I shoot TFCD with you or not at all? As always, I'll be honest, but not intentionally mean. No need to check back as I wll send you a message when I am done.
Model
AlliRae
Posts: 26
Orlando, Florida, US
I would love to hear your thoughts if you have time. Thanks
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Ashley Alexiss wrote: Chiming in I just recently commented on your port in another thread....
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randomnamehere
Posts: 27
Çilov, Bakı, Azerbaijan
This sounds great!! Please, tell me.
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Alyson Pink
Posts: 32
Los Angeles, California, US
^ Mississippi!! LOL, I wanna know
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Kimmi Fox
Posts: 81
London, England, United Kingdom
I'm slightly curious, as I'm new, would be great to get some feed back and learn and improve myself. Would it be possible in a PM though?
Photographer
Adam Mohammed
Posts: 39
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia
Hi, I would really appreciate it if you can give me any feedback on the female models in my portfolio. Is it okay if you can private message me? Please let me know as I would love to hear your thoughts. Thank you very much for your time.
Model
EmilyDoll
Posts: 399
Fontana, California, US
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KatieMariexo
Posts: 259
New York, New York, US
This would definitely be helpful!
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Meghan Congdon
Posts: 706
Austin, Texas, US
I would love your opinion.
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JWest
Posts: 1000
Asheville, North Carolina, US
I'd like to know...be gentle
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Maruschke
Posts: 543
Darfield, Canterbury, New Zealand
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