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Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1730

Washington, District of Columbia, US

I made a thread in the other "serious critique" you can let it die.
Its seems this forum gets more traffic!

Anyway...

I am an amateur, aspiring fashion, beauty, portrait photographer.
It would be great to hear from you all more experienced photographers what is working and what is not in my port! i doubled up on pictures so i could fit more in for a critique.

Oct 12 12 11:21 am Link

Model

kenneth kussman

Posts: 4

Los Angeles, California, US

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spam is the people's enemy

Oct 12 12 11:30 am Link

Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1730

Washington, District of Columbia, US

wtf

Oct 12 12 12:17 pm Link

Photographer

WCR3

Posts: 1135

Houston, Texas, US

Keep at it. You seem to have a good feel for lighting and a rapport with your model (models?). You just need to show more work with a variety of models.

Oct 12 12 12:40 pm Link

Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1730

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Thank you :-)
Yeah I haven't worked with any professional models yet, just shooting my friends for now!

How can I improve on the technical side?

Oct 12 12 01:25 pm Link

Photographer

Bold Sheep Photography

Posts: 234

Blacksburg, Virginia, US

You have very photogenic friends! I like your style. Some of the cropping is a little too tight in places (or a little "off"), but you're doing a great job!

Oct 12 12 06:44 pm Link

Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1730

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Thank you!

Could you give me specific examples so I know what I'm doing wrong?

Oct 12 12 07:34 pm Link

Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1730

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Bump!

Oct 12 12 11:10 pm Link

Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1730

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Bang

Oct 13 12 01:08 pm Link