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Photographer

MTLGB

Posts: 329

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

Please have a look at the first 5 images from my portfolio and let me know what you think.

Please be detailed on what's good and what's not. This way, we can all learn and do better.

Thank you for all that gives their critiques!

Oct 19 12 08:54 pm Link

Photographer

Motordrive Photography

Posts: 3090

Lodi, California, US

Difficult for me to give you a detailed critique of this work, all are montages'.
Retouching seems okay, but with so many images together, good is mixed with
bad. One thing that stood out is a different tone and feel for last shot on the first image. A collage has its place, but with so many, my head starts swimming.

Oct 20 12 10:03 am Link

Photographer

MTLGB

Posts: 329

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

Motordrive Photography wrote:
Difficult for me to give you a detailed critique of this work, all are montages'.
Retouching seems okay, but with so many images together, good is mixed with
bad. One thing that stood out is a different tone and feel for last shot on the first image. A collage has its place, but with so many, my head starts swimming.

Very good point! Thanks for that tip

Oct 22 12 06:27 pm Link