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Photographer

Hector Fernandez

Posts: 1152

Mexico City, Distrito Federal, Mexico

All the pics in my portfolio are open for critique. All is new work I have been doing the last month.

Oct 29 12 05:52 pm Link

Photographer

noel marrero

Posts: 441

Menlo Park, California, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121029/16/508f12cd8a8a9_m.jpg

I like the concept, but it feels a bit weak with so much negative space, an centered image.  I'm drawn to the face, but it's not sharp enough.


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121029/16/508f1345b9a9e_m.jpg

I like the concept.  I would like a stronger expression on her face (same is true of the above.  I like the eyebrow arch, but just not there in the mouth.   The orientation of the left leg to the camera is unflattering.  The twist in the curtain is generating a vertical line next to face that looks unintentional.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121029/17/508f1b8313b12_m.jpg

To soft, no focus point.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121029/17/508f1b5937676_m.jpg

I love the focus on the face.  I wish there was a bit more light on the hair, so that we could have some definition.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121029/17/508f1d9428b9e_m.jpg

I like the concept.  Not sure the tilt in the frame is really getting you anything.  Unfortunately the black seat makes it look as if she's sitting on her dress, making the image look fake.   But over all, I like how this one tells a store and the key element is well in focus and obvious.

I liked where you were going with your port.  I think some of your images are lacking a bit of sharpness and sometimes the subject didn't pop enough, but otherwise interesting.

Oct 30 12 09:12 am Link

Photographer

Hector Fernandez

Posts: 1152

Mexico City, Distrito Federal, Mexico

Thanks Noel!

Oct 30 12 10:35 am Link