Forums > Critique > New Photos - thoughts? What should be added?

Model

Rachael Bueckert

Posts: 1121

Red Deer, Alberta, Canada

1.A
http://sphotos-b.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-prn1/15068_393267354100696_1646464709_n.jpg

2.A
http://sphotos-d.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/587_387832677977497_919775895_n.jpg

1.B
http://sphotos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/222451_387832704644161_1843613601_n.jpg

2.B
http://sphotos-b.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash3/530904_387832717977493_253296040_n.jpg

3.B
http://sphotos-e.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash3/599212_393282087432556_339925060_n.jpg

4.B
http://sphotos-g.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash3/643900_393282107432554_1400984858_n.jpg

Thank You!

Nov 10 12 12:43 pm Link

Photographer

SSR Designs

Posts: 471

Bartlesville, Oklahoma, US

2 is my absolute favorite and then 3 and 4.

Nov 10 12 12:50 pm Link

Photographer

Rated Z

Posts: 1

San Diego, California, US

1A:  Make fight towards you.  Hand claws at floor.  More pull at bra and some skin.

2A:  Pose her more so it looks like she's sitting natural.  Shorten the chain so it hangs in space with no obvious attachment.

1B:  Great light.  Excellent depth of field.

2B:  Good shot for a fashion ad.

3B:  Flat.

4B:  No contrast.  Make the shot more intimate.  Head tilted more left.  Eyes at you.

Nov 10 12 01:00 pm Link

Model

Rachael Bueckert

Posts: 1121

Red Deer, Alberta, Canada

Bump!

Nov 10 12 02:37 pm Link

Photographer

LittleWhiteRabbit Photo

Posts: 134

Columbus, Ohio, US

You, my dear, are a stunning model!

1a) Shows off your gorgeous figure to a T.  My qualm is more w/how the photographer lit the photo - I think w/more play with light and dark it would have been amazing...right now I'm distracted by all the dust and scratches on the floor and there is glare on the carved part of the chair - if you can get a black and white conversion w/some vignetting around the edges it would be best. Also it needs to be cropped more narrow.

2a) Kind of awkward and I'm not fond of how the photographer lit it - probably the weakest of the bunch

1b) Love it - would be better w/a tighter crop

2b) LOVE! Fabulous!

3b-4b) Very nice - photog should probably do a bit of retouching on under eye area...3b could use a bit more contrast as it's backlit which kind of washes out stuff.

Nov 10 12 03:11 pm Link