 Rate this on scale of 1-10 give best/worst feature Nov 27 12 10:03 am Link 2-1/2 Not crazy about the background, the whiteboard seems off, and she has the 'hair-tie-bracelet' Nov 27 12 11:17 am Link Kind of a interesting idea but not well done... 1.8 Nov 27 12 11:23 am Link no sorry. -1 You can see where you tried painting around the board to make it whiter? and the lighting is unflattering, her face looks blotchy, overall effort in the photo is 0% no time spent with light, no time spent on retouching, it doesn't tell a story and just looks amateaur, It's not a photo that anyone else who hasn't held a camera before couldn't take. Photo is blurry/or high pass? and her hair looks terrible. Sorry sound blunt but im guessing you want serious critique. Nov 27 12 11:36 am Link K I S S P H O T O wrote: Nov 27 12 11:48 am Link 1/10. For the models make up Poor post work ( can see the white paint) qulaity is not there, pose is boring... Looks like its taken with a mobile phone Nov 27 12 12:34 pm Link Whites of eyes over processed As pointed out the white board paint job and hair band on wrist Nov 27 12 05:09 pm Link K I S S P H O T O wrote: +1 Nov 27 12 06:10 pm Link 1 at least  model has a good look  composition of shot is just not happening...JMHO Nov 27 12 06:14 pm Link I am going to add one more thing: the watermark. It changes the depth perception of the white board due to its location and direction. The white board seems perpendicular to the line of site there and parallel to the wall where you can see the direction of the board. Nov 27 12 08:34 pm Link 2. Terrible postprocessing. Not sure what you were trying to do with that whiteboard. I gave it a 2 because I've seen worse. Dec 02 12 03:46 am Link ... and you're holding the marker the way a psycho would wield a knife. Dec 02 12 03:30 pm Link 1, looks very snapshotty poor lighting (shadow on whiteboard) you can see the marks where you white out the board, she has a hair tie on her arm, skin is extremely blotchy, Dec 02 12 04:02 pm Link 2 Yeah. Work on saturation (not too much!) Clean up skin. The pic would improve if you cropped the frame off on the left. Just say "NO" to hair bands on wrists. Dec 02 12 09:02 pm Link |
