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RoryBanwellPhotography

Posts: 4

Coffs Harbour, New South Wales, Australia

Hello!

I am new to MM and have been on a photography hiatus for two years due to ALL of my gear getting stolen - possibly the most devastating day of my life.

Anyway, I am now back and hoping to build up my portfolio and equipment again - I have a few new shoots lined up and have uploaded a few photos from my recent trip to the US as well as some older photos (from 2009 etc).

Am keen for some feedback etc as it has been a while.. Just getting back in the swing of things. Currently working with a Canon 5D Mark III and a 600RX flash.

So yeah, any feedback, communication etc would be great.

Glad to be part of such a great community smile

Dec 02 12 10:15 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 8923

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121125/04/50b20bcb6929d_m.jpg
Shirts with bright white logos are distracting
Vignetting over done
Material of model and bush have minimal detail, could try dodging them

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121126/05/50b36b1615ca6_m.jpg
What is the subject, why was the tilt used
If it’s a wedding car show the car and bridal party, or the groomsmen decorating it

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121201/23/50bb087448eb5_m.jpg
Give the eyes some lighting
Think about using a longer focal length

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121126/05/50b36b48b3c94_m.jpg
This looks more like a snapshot at a wedding, going to guess you are tall, might want to lower the camera

Dec 03 12 06:40 am Link