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Model

Autumn Rose Brightly

Posts: 1097

Crowley, Texas, US

I am here to improve and would love to know how I'm doing. Just passed the three month mark on MM.

Dec 03 12 12:21 pm Link

Photographer

jesse paulk

Posts: 3712

Phoenix, Arizona, US

expressions and poses.  enough with the headshots.

Dec 04 12 12:00 am Link

Photographer

Orca Bay Images

Posts: 32234

Woodinville, Washington, US

Like Jesse said, no more headshots.

For starters, maybe some full-length shots of you in standing poses in outfits like this:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121202/15/50bbe44e861b8_m.jpg

Dec 04 12 04:45 am Link

Photographer

Drew Smith Photography

Posts: 5210

Nottingham, England, United Kingdom

The thing that strikes me first is that many of the images are 'flat' - they don't jump out at the viewer. This is not your fault though.

And yes, it would be nice to see what shape you are.

Dec 04 12 04:53 am Link

Model

Autumn Rose Brightly

Posts: 1097

Crowley, Texas, US

Thanks guys, I'm working on my full-body shots and hope to have some up soon smile

Dec 04 12 07:06 am Link

Model

MatureModelMM

Posts: 1199

Detroit, Michigan, US

From your profile:

"Be your own kind of beautiful"

"I am a curvy girl who wants to teach women to embrace their shape. I used to feel very awkward about my shape.Through hard work I have gained a confidence in myself and would love to be a role model for others." 




Based on that, I have to agree that not only would full body shots be a great addition, but if you are comfortable with it how about some tastefully done lingerie or bathing suit poses?

You are really beautiful, don't be afraid to try new things that you haven't done before.

Dec 04 12 07:17 am Link

Model

Jen B

Posts: 3187

Hopkinsville, Kentucky, US

Autumn Rose Brightly wrote:
I am here to improve and would love to know how I'm doing. Just passed the three month mark on MM.

Hello,

I agree with the idea of broadening away from the headshots to show more.

I do like these two shots of you the most out of your headshots and would be itnerested if either was your avi, (granted I am going soley on your expression and look here, not on the photography.)
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30839256
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30135066

You are doing great. At 3 months my port was no where near yours.
Jen

Dec 04 12 08:21 am Link